The part that gets me is, this is the best poem I've written in a year.

Sep 10, 2007 20:20

I don't belong here.
I'm not exactly sure where "here" is,
But I know I don't fit in.
I'm not sure what to do with it.

All of a sudden,
It feels like something isn't right.
It's driving me crazy
Because I don't know what it is.

I know there are people
Who love me and really do care
What I do, how I feel.
But I don't, and that doesn't work.

How do I fix this?
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does field surgeon count? aeshnor September 11 2007, 02:38:44 UTC
i think heart repair might be a bit beyond me, but i can do heart massage to keep you alive till it will beat again on its own, perhaps.
I love you too, dearest.
I always will.
Its far from over.
*hugs*
you are, as always, in our hearts.
but mostly in mine.

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Re: does field surgeon count? chicabelle16 September 11 2007, 04:35:24 UTC
Way to make me cry again. But this time, happy tears. After I just finished a fairly sappy little letter to you, which I think I might slip inside your book (if that's alright). I don't want to throw off your mojo or anything like that ;)

PS
I love you four (2^2).

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Re: does field surgeon count? aeshnor September 11 2007, 05:12:03 UTC
by all means, slip the letter in my book. firstly, that book is meant to be a history of my soul, so you most definetly have a place there. secondly, how would a lovely letter from the girl i adore most be out of place there?

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