That night where we shared our songs with each other. God that was a mistake

Mar 05, 2005 15:04

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myjanuaryalone March 6 2005, 03:42:35 UTC
I check everytime i am on livejournal for new entries by you...i have the same problem sometimes...every single song reminds me of him...and it sucks, and one song I almost always cry on...i hate it, but I can't stop it... i'll get over it sometime i hope...

~Mary

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oxsosarcasticxo March 6 2005, 16:36:35 UTC
oh hunny. *hug*

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whatuwishfor March 6 2005, 19:26:01 UTC
LOVE IT!

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chicagolights March 9 2005, 03:02:18 UTC
thanks so much

<33333333333

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i love the poems! piratesally March 8 2005, 21:10:16 UTC
once again I love your writing! I wish I could write! haha

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Re: i love the poems! chicagolights March 9 2005, 03:03:12 UTC
<333333333's!!

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twothingslost March 9 2005, 02:41:49 UTC
That was really good. I liked it. The last paragraph, and some of the lines, really stood out. You have a really strong voice when you write. You can really tell what you are feeling. I like that :)

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chicagolights March 9 2005, 03:08:37 UTC
okay, so i like always try and tell people thanks when they comment and like it (it only seems fair) but then i want to tell them why i dont like it or what i felt when i wrote it and like.. i dont think theyd get it.

i wasnt too sure about this one, if it flowed right. it was about chris and i and how he might want to get back together and how we had this one AMAZING night just sitting in the car, kissing and thinking and talking and listening to "our songs" (hence the title). mine is what it is to burn by finch and his his howie day- collide. its an amazing song, and i always feel like i know a secret im not supposed to when i listen to it.

i like the end. i like when i put quotes in it. it makes it unique and mine.. yet yours at the same time. i hate stuff you cant relate too. everyone i mean by you.

ahhhhh something just came to me "everytime i blinked//and opened my eyes//there were new words from you//cutting into my heart"

im gunna work on it....

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