Cars or Corners Version 2

[chicagolights]

It’s too cold to cry this morning

The tears would freeze my face

While life would keep on living

And that’s what I’m afraid of

If I open my eyes

You wont be close enough to touch

If I part my lips

You’ll never hear what I’m dying to say

Your wall is there, the one that’s between us

Made up of the words you can’t say

While “Hello” is what I’m

Comments

[julianisdope]

nice contrast. i think i like version 2 better.

[chicagolights]

as i look back some of my stuff feels juvinile. while i loved the original, i wanted to see what it looked like... less juvinile? I may go back and edit more like so. I will always have a compare button :)

thanks. i think i like this one better too.