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chicanexo

Chicane (1/3)

Mar 11, 2013 23:49

kai/kyungsoo (+ wufan/kyungsoo/zitao) ; r ; ~8,700w ; criminal AU
kyungsoo likes order, logic and constants while kai likes messing up solved puzzles and throwing things off track

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kaisoo, exo, chicane

Comments 13

hipployta February 12 2013, 01:52:29 UTC

Chanyeol how could you! You bastard!

chicanexo February 12 2013, 18:54:47 UTC

You tell him! /hands Chanyeol over so you can beat him up.
Thanks for reading! ^-^

devout_devotion February 12 2013, 03:30:36 UTC

This is really interesting omg
“If I knew I was signing up for this level of homosexuality, I would have joined a kpop group or something.”
icwudt hurrhurr
CAN I JUST SAY THAT I AM LOVING THE KRIS/TAO/KYUNGSOO TRIO LIKE AWIEKJD LF AMAZING
and omg kyungsoo in ripped skinny jeans kill me that is noT OKAY I AM NOT OKAY I AM AODFIBH HE WOULD BE SO HOT I CAN'T
quick question though: is chanyeol like the middle man in their deals?
but yeah I AM LOVING THIS SO HARD RN I CAN'T
really really minor thing?
After that, his mind goes blank, only one thought left that has him up and moving within seconds; run.
you don't need the "that" there ((:
eta: it should be a : not a ; ((((:

chicanexo February 12 2013, 19:04:06 UTC

Thanks for reading, your comment really made me smile! ^-^
haha thanks, tbh I added in Kris and Tao because they're my favourites, but I like the way the dynamics worked out.
sobs ikr, I imagined him in Taemin's ripped pants that he likes to wear so much and sdfghjhg /nosebleed. I hope the stylists make it happen for real! Kind of yes, it's clarified in the beginning of the next part exactly what Chanyeol is to the Exo boys! :) I'm really glad you like it and thanks for pointing the mistake out! I'll be sure to fix it once I'm back on my laptop.

devout_devotion February 19 2013, 03:55:00 UTC

AHHH????!!!! I LOVE KAI????? SO MUCH??????
I'M REALLY LOVING THIS SO FAR!
lmao their first kiss together was so that kai wouldn't die
I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT PART! :)))

trawlin February 12 2013, 04:44:22 UTC

;~; chanyeol whut did u do
i love this, this is awesome
and the the bit of taosoo was very niiiice.
i'm looking forward to more! <3

chicanexo February 12 2013, 19:06:01 UTC

Thanks so much! ^-^ haha I couldn't resist adding it in, the prospect of Tao seducing Kyungsoo was too hot to pass up tbh.
I'll post the next part up as soon as I can, and thanks a lot for reading!

doitlikethis123 February 12 2013, 07:03:14 UTC

ohmygosh ohmygosh SCREAMINGGGG AT THIS AWESOMENESSSS~~~ it's a very interesting plot and i'm lookin forward to kaisoo~!

chicanexo February 12 2013, 19:06:46 UTC

haha thank you for reading this and thinking it's awesome! ^-^ Kai will be introduced very soon so anticipate it okay!

subi February 13 2013, 03:34:04 UTC

Wow, I don't know if I've been just picking up the wrong ones, but this is one of the best EXO fics I've read in a while! Can't wait for the rest of the story. ♥
Oh and I've never ever imagined Tao/Kyungsoo working but I happily have to admit that it does. :'DD

Can't really notice any mistakes, I could just be blind being a non-native English speaker but oh well, it could also mean you didn't have much. :D

Good luck with writing!

chicanexo February 14 2013, 23:21:27 UTC

aww asdfgbhgtrew thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'll try to post up the rest soon! ^-^
and haha same tbh, I don't think I've even seen Tao and Kyungsoo ever interact irl but then I wrote about the elevator and the temptation was too much!
Thanks for looking out for mistakes! I read over it like five times before posting so hopefully I managed to get them all myself then. :D