Ficlet: Broken (Peter)

Feb 06, 2010 17:09

Title: Broken
Fandom: Fringe
Author: chichuri 
Characters:  Peter, Olivia, Walter
Word Count: 318
Rating: PG
Summary: As soon as Peter sees Olivia, he knows something is wrong. Follow-up to "Jacksonville".
Spoilers: Through episode 2.14, "Jacksonville".
Disclaimer: I don't own Fringe or its characters.

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lone_pyramid February 6 2010, 23:53:44 UTC
Oh, wow. To borrow a phrase from Bones, that's just heartcrushing.

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chichuri February 7 2010, 03:35:35 UTC
Thank you. And I got to say, I think the angst stemming from this episode is going to be epic.

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lone_pyramid February 7 2010, 14:16:29 UTC
I think I've read more Jacksonville fic in the past few days than all the Fringe fic put together in the past month. Angst = inspiration. ;)

The fallout from this is going to be painful. Which is good, as long as there is some sort of happiness on the horizon.

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chichuri February 7 2010, 03:37:54 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed my angsty little followup to the episode.

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dine7184 February 7 2010, 00:05:36 UTC
Oh... Am I a bad person when I say I might actually hate Walter for this?! -.-

So heartbreaking... *sniff*

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chichuri February 7 2010, 03:39:15 UTC
I expect everyone's going to hate Walter, just a little bit, by the time we're done with this story arc.

Thank you for reading!

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twixbitch February 7 2010, 00:07:26 UTC
Uh, hello. You can't write that and then just stop there! Gahhh.

Amazing.

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chichuri February 7 2010, 03:40:45 UTC
Thank you!

No, you probably do want me to stop there. If I don't, it's just going to get even more angsty from here.

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chichuri February 7 2010, 03:48:46 UTC
Thank you. Is it wrong that I'm honored (and a little humbled) that my words had this much power over you?

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chichuri February 7 2010, 05:27:09 UTC
See, sometimes I like the angst because it makes the joy so much brighter in contrast, and the struggle to find that joy all the sweeter. I'm hoping that will be the same for the show, too, although I'm half afraid it will end up leaving us all with broken hearts instead.

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