Fic: Prelude to Escape (Olivia, Peter)

Apr 15, 2010 03:03

Title: Prelude to Escape
Fandom: Fringe
Author: chichuri 
Characters/Pairing: Olivia, Peter, Olivia/Peter
Word Count: 1194
Rating: PG
Summary: Peter doesn't take the truth about his origins well.
Spoilers: Through episode 2.14, "Jacksonville.".
Disclaimer: I don't own Fringe or its characters.
Author's note: I wrote most of this during the hiatus, but only ( Read more... )

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muselives April 15 2010, 13:20:19 UTC
I'm... I'm just going to let this soak in. Because damn, that was good. Good of him to invite her, good internal explanations for why she'd stay, excellent back and forth as they made their argument, especially the parts without words. And, since I can't resist being the Debbie Downer, much more satisfying kiss ;P

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chichuri April 15 2010, 17:45:44 UTC
Thank you. Glad you liked it, and that it worked so well for you.

They weren't even supposed to kiss, though! It just... wrote itself in.

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marinw April 15 2010, 14:15:38 UTC
That was good! Your Olivia/Peter dialouge sounds very in character.

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chichuri April 15 2010, 17:46:21 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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chichuri April 15 2010, 17:52:56 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the characterization worked for you. In my head, Peter does return sometime, too, probably in the middle of everything going wrong.

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usagiko April 15 2010, 15:35:18 UTC
;__; ngl, I have tears in my eyes right now. It's just...so sad. But awesome.

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chichuri April 15 2010, 17:54:08 UTC
Thank you. Glad you liked it (if "liked" is the proper word). *offers handkerchief*

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usagiko April 16 2010, 05:08:53 UTC
Oh, definitely liked. Just sad. :(

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dine7184 April 15 2010, 16:48:13 UTC
You... are.. probably one of the best Fringe writer out there, if not the best. This was soooo lovely, yet so sad. *sniff* But it would be great if we would see this on the show. ;)

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chichuri April 15 2010, 17:55:45 UTC
*blushes* Thank you. Glad you like my writing, and that you like this particular story.

Yeah, something like this would be neat to see on the show, even if it would mean they'd have to write Peter out for at least a few episodes. The angst would be massive.

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