Ficlet: Complications (Olivia)

[chichuri]

Title: Complications
Fandom: Fringe
Author: chichuri 
Characters/Pairing: Olivia, Peter, Rachel, Ella, mention of Olivia/Peter
Word Count: 814
Rating: PG
Summary: Olivia is behind schedule.
Warnings: Mentions of past and future character death
Spoilers: Through episode 2.15, "Peter.".
Disclaimer: I don't own Fringe or its characters.
Author's note: This was

Comments

[chichuri]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was seriously afraid this had ended up too confusing, so I'm delighted to see "subtleties" rather than "WTF?".

[muselives]

I never get tired of your universe hopping Olivias. Way to hit all the notes in her life so, so concisely without losing any of their importance. So well done.

[chichuri]

Thank you!

I have this fascination with universe hopping Olivias, enough that I keep coming back to them despite the fact that every single time it breaks my brain trying to figure out how to write them so it's somewhat clear which one I'm talking about.

[lule_bell]

Omg! This is wonderful. I had to read it a few times to really get it - and I'm still not sure if I have. I love all the embedded subtleties. Really really well done.

[chichuri]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

I admit, I kind of suspect I hit a little too hard on the implying what was going on rather than outright stating, so I'm not sure how much of the backstory really comes through.

[sugangel7]

Craziness! I wasn't expecting that. Had to go back and read it to catch all the little clues, her running it over in her head who she was and not having accounted for the complication of Peter Bishop.

Nice twist with the other Rachel having been killed & Olivia being so glad to see her.

Thanks for sharing!

[chichuri]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I have to admit, I have a little too much fondness for twist endings.

[raiining]

Oh OUCH.

Ouch ouch ouch.