Fic: Helpful Distractions (Olivia/Peter)

Aug 26, 2011 02:53

Title: Helpful Distractions
Fandom: Fringe
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mack_the_spoon August 26 2011, 22:31:46 UTC
Nicely done - cute, in-character, and I can see it all happening.

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chichuri August 27 2011, 07:18:58 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

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namarie24 August 26 2011, 23:59:10 UTC
Aw. This is excellent. I love their banter and the way their affection & love shows through it all.

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chichuri August 27 2011, 07:19:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm so hoping to see more moments like these on the show this season.

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sugangel7 August 27 2011, 01:49:58 UTC
Totally in character. Your dialogue is so sharp and fresh and them -- love the banter. Love how he helps her even when he's not there.

Lovely little fic! =)

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chichuri August 27 2011, 07:20:13 UTC
Thank you! Writing banter between them is so much fun.

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tilden13 August 27 2011, 20:53:41 UTC
Mmm, sexy banterus interruptus! I love the very subtle things you've managed to pack in here--for example, somehow I'm delighted that Olivia hasn't changed how she dresses, and that Peter has filed it away under "HAWT" in his giant brain. Also, that HE hurt himself jumping off a building, heh.

It was also nice of you to resurrect Agent Jessup for her biennial two minutes of fame...and I admit to pulling up short at the hilarious/terrifying notion of Brandon in the field, hoo boy. Nice!

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chichuri August 28 2011, 08:16:00 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

I think both women with guns and women in suits are two of Peter's definite turn-ons--at least when it's Olivia with the guns and the suits. And he should know better than to try manage the same stunts that Olivia can pull off with ease.

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kryptocow September 15 2011, 06:56:18 UTC
Very cute! I had to laugh at Olivia playing along but being difficult all the same.

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chichuri September 17 2011, 08:39:05 UTC
Thank you! And hey, if Peter's gonna flirt with Olivia in the middle of a case, Olivia's gonna make him work for it.

Love, your icon, by the way. So cute.

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kryptocow September 18 2011, 02:42:43 UTC
Thanks! It is a both cute and handy icon. ^^

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