Forget I Said It

Jan 22, 2012 10:08

Author: chickinwhite
Pairing: Kahlan / Cara
Word account: ~ 2700
Rating: PG 17
Summary: After "Desecrated" Kahlan needs to talk to Cara...
Disclaimer: no business, just fan-fun!
AN: Originally written for  lots_pornbattle, Prompts: Desecrated, more than a hug - what really happened - and - Kahlan seeks out Cara after Desecrated  (though it turned out to be more the ( Read more... )

seeker porn battle, desecrated, user: chickinwhite, kahlan/cara

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chickinwhite January 23 2012, 09:26:04 UTC
Yeah, all good things come to an end...
The more I love to see this little piece was appreciated. I was truly not convinced and hesitated a lot to post it. But - YAY!! - great that you liked it!
Thank you!

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synergyfox January 23 2012, 17:48:58 UTC
D'aw. This was a heartwrenchingly sweet fic. I love the way you had past and present thrown in together. It made for a perfect balance between the two.

*shops Cara and Kahlan* now go borrow an slider and make babies.

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chickinwhite January 23 2012, 19:16:15 UTC
Balance... Oh yes, I like that you see it in balance. I´ve tried something new - at least for me - and I´m quite happy that the readers apreciate it.
Haha! Foxy goes makes babies... LOL! If you get enough of them (first wrong thought, cause you´ll never get enough of them...), please, share the babies, ok?
Thanks! :)

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synergyfox January 23 2012, 23:28:26 UTC
It was all just so... well like there was a little bit of angst and the perfect amount of fluff and just <33333

Asdfjkl; I totally meant elixer not slider! XD

Babies will be back after Denna and Cara get married xD

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chickinwhite January 24 2012, 07:45:52 UTC
LOL!
- And I already wondered if this was one of the many saws I do not know... *grin* - and so silently just accepted it...

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raug_moss January 23 2012, 20:33:30 UTC
That was really awesome. I seem to have a thing for fics with feelings and sexytimes and yours has it all.
I especially liked the flashbacks. That was a great idea.

Poor clueless Richard though. But not as poor as the tree. It certainly is not the tree's fault lulz.

Thanks for writing.

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chickinwhite January 23 2012, 21:31:41 UTC
YAY! Someone feels sorrow for the tree! LOL!I´m sure, its leaves will shine in a brighter green of pride so... *grin*
Thank you!It seems I´m just not able to write sexytimes without a little plot and ...FEELINGS... :) And honestly? I like that fact, hehe.
That the flashbacks work is like - YAY! `cause it was an experiment and I had no idea if it would ...
So: THANKS!!! For reading. And commenting. :)

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strongwoman62 January 23 2012, 22:01:49 UTC
My goodness, that was so beautifully written! I went looking for porn and instead found a story with real depth and tons of feelings. What a treat! :)

And, as everyone else has said, the flashbacks worked terrifically well to tell the story.

Great story, thanks for sharing!

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chickinwhite January 24 2012, 07:48:18 UTC
Thank you!!
Yes, there is no excuse for the ...almost lack of porn... :)
But your kind words are making me smile all over. It´s just - I can´t go without my sentimental romantic little heart... :)
I am so happy you liked it!!

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rawrrr93 February 1 2012, 08:43:49 UTC
This was so lovely. The way you wrote with flashbacks really added a certain element to the story. Beautiful take on desecrated!

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chickinwhite February 1 2012, 16:42:44 UTC
Aww, thank you! I´m really a bit proud that you say it´s beautiful *blushes*. Though I know, the beauty is due to our amazing ladies, that´s for sure! :) I´m glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and liking! and telling so! :)

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