Pride & Destiny

[chickinwhite]

Prologue

It was late afternoon and soft sun-rays put a golden shimmering light onto the clearance. First shadows already lurked between the rocks and promised nightfall was near. It was that time of the day when birds fell silent, searching their hideouts for the night; when their melodic chirping gave way to that expectant quietness before the

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[greatshow]

I meant to reply early in the morning (meaning August 16, not the August 17 date that is showing up with this post), a little after I read this prologue, but my Internet connection was not acting how I wanted it to. Anyway, what I wanted to state then was that this prologue is an intriguing spin on the canon story, and is a good start.

Edited to add in bit about the date.

[chickinwhite]

Aww, never too late, my dear! I love to see you´re interested! And thanks for commenting!! You know how much we need this kind of support...
Hope to see your own writing again, soon!?