You know you want to add me...alicialJuly 7 2006, 16:31:21 UTC
Natal perception The water escapes encompassing the trident, which emerges from the stable, reliable exterior. The finger of curious intellect and abstract insight jab at the empathetic concealed glow of the moon Fast forward to the three fathers: Jovial Stern Dark weighing beneath the descent, seeking a symmetric, harmonious rhythm. The great rebel teases the centaur with his erratic bohemian desires. The collective wave and its passion ego impulse rippling with affliction and fortune. The complexity of it all accentuated by self reflection dramatized through contact intensified with intimacy yet perceived as just me.
Re: from saying your name, by richard sikenchild_of_ozJuly 11 2006, 05:24:45 UTC
Welcome.
I just read that whole poem out loud, word for word. And it tasted delicious. WoW. Thank you for sharing that poem. I'm going to print it off and pin it to my wall.
Re: archipelago of kissesshaneywaneyJuly 15 2006, 00:06:20 UTC
wow, I'm so glad you liked it. I added you a few days ago and have since been trying to find the right thing to post. I'm shaina, thanks for adding me(:
without any guidance or assistance from you i have loved you assiduously for 8 months 2 weeks & a day i have been stood up four times i've left 7 packages on your doorstep forty poems 2 plants & 3 handmade notecards i left town so i could send them to you you have been no help to me on my job you call at 3:00 in th emorning on weekdays so i could drive 27.5 miles cross the bay before i go to work charming charming but you are of no assistance i want you to know this was an experiment to see how selfish i could be if i would really carry on to snare a possible lover if i was capable of debasing myself for the love of another if i could stand not being wanted when i wanted to be wanted & i cannot so with no further assistance & no guidance from you i am ending this affair
this note is attached to a plant i've been watering since the day i met you you may water it your damn self.
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an excerpt from "for colored girls who have concidered suicide when the rainbow is enuf" by: ntozake shange
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The water escapes
encompassing the trident,
which emerges from the stable,
reliable exterior.
The finger of curious intellect
and abstract insight
jab at the empathetic
concealed glow of the moon
Fast forward
to the three fathers:
Jovial
Stern
Dark
weighing beneath the descent,
seeking a symmetric,
harmonious rhythm.
The great rebel teases the centaur
with his erratic
bohemian desires.
The collective wave and its
passion
ego
impulse
rippling with affliction
and fortune.
The complexity of it all
accentuated by self reflection
dramatized through contact
intensified with intimacy
yet perceived as just me.
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You have been added. Poptart?
Yours most truthful,
Steven
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I just read that whole poem out loud, word for word.
And it tasted delicious.
WoW.
Thank you for sharing that poem.
I'm going to print it off and pin it to my wall.
Sheesh that's a great poem...
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By the way, thanx for the myspace add...
laters.
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You're added. :)
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i have loved you assiduously for 8 months 2 weeks & a day
i have been stood up four times
i've left 7 packages on your doorstep
forty poems 2 plants & 3 handmade notecards
i left town so i could send them to you
you have been no help to me on my job
you call at 3:00 in th emorning on weekdays
so i could drive 27.5 miles cross the bay before i go to work
charming charming
but you are of no assistance
i want you to know
this was an experiment
to see how selfish i could be
if i would really carry on to snare a possible lover
if i was capable of debasing myself for the love of another
if i could stand not being wanted
when i wanted to be wanted
& i cannot
so
with no further assistance & no guidance from you
i am ending this affair
this note is attached to a plant
i've been watering since the day i met you
you may water it
your damn self.
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an excerpt from "for colored girls who have concidered suicide when the rainbow is enuf" by: ntozake shange
its one of my favourite poems..
i would ( ... )
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gosh. that poem/note really brings back some memories...
yeah, you're added.
~Add me?
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and i added you :)
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That's a terrific book. part of my last summer's reading.
Thanks agian.
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