faces placid who just can't seem to care...radianreverieFebruary 26 2003, 17:58:56 UTC
This is so intricately written... So many thoughts and ideas laced into a single compostition of words. I especially like the third stanza, and the imagery about the "cherub cheeks" to "hands and knees and crawling" was incredible. This poem is one of my favorites of what I've read of yours. You did a beautiful job in portraying something so utterly complex and extensive. -tess
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So many thoughts and ideas laced into a single compostition of words. I especially like the third stanza, and the imagery about the "cherub cheeks" to "hands and knees and crawling" was incredible. This poem is one of my favorites of what I've read of yours. You did a beautiful job in portraying something so utterly complex and extensive.
-tess
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