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filming an apology
Feb 23, 2003 22:38
i dont think this is anywhere near as polished as the one before it of the same style, so feel free to absolutely rip this to shreds (
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_pixi
February 24 2003, 11:06:15 UTC
I love this style of poetry.
This is a great poem, and I'd give suggestions but they're really insignificant like taking a word out, and I can't figure out a definate rhyming scheme so I'm just going to leave it at that.
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This is a great poem, and I'd give suggestions but they're really insignificant like taking a word out, and I can't figure out a definate rhyming scheme so I'm just going to leave it at that.
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