The broken down Hotel

[childofscott]

It was about 2:15am, and the mere possibility of finding a vacant space to stay was daunting to think about. We were driving alone on empty roads with mostly empty ends. Cracks knifed their way through 90% of the pavement. The other 10% was covered with various forms of plant life. The flickering street lamps attracted thousands of little creatures

Comments

fiction?

[crowchild]

so, is this story completely made up? it's very good writing.

Re: fiction?

[childofscott]

made up

Re: fiction?

[amiii]

now, what kind of made up? the pooled-out-of-the-head kind or the sat-down-for-hours-and-scribbled-and-scratched-and-edited-50,000,000-times?
either way, keep going.
stream of consiousness style?
keep going, i like it and so does katrina and... that says plenty enough ;).

Re: fiction?

[childofscott]

Well, I think it was a cross between the two. I pretty much made it up on the spot, but I added bits where it seemed to fit after reading it over. It took maybe....45 min?

So yes. Stream of consciousness it is. Bah whatever though. It seems right now that's all I got. If more should come, it will, and I will write. If not, I will continue on regular schedule with my supposedly obligatory mumbo-jumbo.

AND:

Since I'm just slightly too lazy to write a separate email right now:

Dear Amy,

This week I will give you a call in the morning. I'm crossing my fingers, but it appears that I may just have next weekend off, and hence be able to come over to the larger land mass.

Joe