i cant do LJ cuts

[chilibaby]

As we watched that inevitable sunrise that morning, sitting silently in a row, I realized just how amazing life can be. It was simple enough, six best friends watching the night grow into morning from a small beach on the last morning of summer camp, but at the time we honestly believed there was no place else in the world. They say people are

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[anonymous]

Hey, thats such an awesome essay..im strugglin with coming up with a topic but yours has such good details and stuff with the dew covered fields..ahh very nice. 1 thing i think u should delete is the "in 350 words or less" just say its taught me more than i can express. cuz it sounds kinda yearbook-ish like oh i have so many ppl to shoutout to but not enough space, u kno. Anyways awesome...im jealous.
tlak to you soon
Amanda Roderick

[chilibaby]

thanks, i appreciate your input, i was especially weary of that "350 words" thing, you really helped clear it up for me.

its really great to hear from you, we really should hang out this year i miss you.

[songs_about_keg]

honestly...the diction and imagery in that essay is amazing. It sounds completely corny or whatever but i just got a tear in my eye when i read that. It's truly incredible.