DRABBLE: I'd Tell You, But... (Sirius/Bellatrix)

[chimbomba]

Title: I'd Tell You, But...
Pairing: Sirius/Bellatrix
Rating: PG
Word Count: 195
Summary: Things Sirius Black would tell Bellatrix, but can't.
Author's Notes: For trinityday at the Multi-Fandom Request-A-Fic Meme Type-Thing, who requested "the fine line between love and hate". Cross-posted here. Not sure if I actually like it, but oh well, I wanted to try. :

Comments

[peskywhistpaw]

Guh. This is excellent. And the last line really seals off the whole thing. *shivers*

[chimbomba]

Thanks! :DD

[captainpookey]

OMG! This is great. The voice is very much Sirius's, and it's great. I love the last line to pieces.

[chimbomba]

Wow, thanks very much! ♥

[cesaretech]

I love this sort of writing style, and you have an excellent grasp on it. It's captivating, keeps you waiting for each line. I've never read this pairing before, but you kept it quite believable, along line with the Black incest-thing. I love the last lines, especially. Good work.

[chimbomba]

Thank you! *g* I used to be creeped out by Sirius/Bellatrix, but there are certain elements about them that are fun to explore. :)