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Polished Diamonds

Oct 30, 2008 17:21

Title: Polished Diamonds
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: chinesetakeout
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Prompt: 029. love @ 50stories
Summary: Was there ever a proper way to end an affair with someone you would always love?
Rating: PG13
Genre: romance, angst
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: No.
Comments: For acu_saree who pretty much requested an all around not-so-happy story.

( Tora watched from afar as Hiroto’s pretty, pretty eyes shone like polished diamonds. )

50stories, hiroto x tora, alice nine., fanfiction

Comments 12

bauci October 31 2008, 06:44:32 UTC

It always makes me wonder how sad things can be so beautiful. Maybe it's realizing how easily things can be broken ('~beauty in a breakdown'). Liked this a lot.

theklewerz October 31 2008, 10:06:31 UTC

aah... it's too sad DDD:

chemical_alice October 31 2008, 15:23:53 UTC

So sad... But so wonderfully written. I guess actually it is more bittersweet than sad. Good job :)

beautifulgeorge October 31 2008, 19:02:10 UTC

You portrayed Tora as a big wuss with relationships. He acts like a complete doofus. I like it. :D

hirachan October 31 2008, 20:16:53 UTC

awwww sniff sniff i love it!