Bend and Not Break

Mar 09, 2009 21:49

Title: Bend and Not Break
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: chinesetakeout
Pairing: Kai/Uruha
Summary: It wasn’t raining but the chill outside indicated it would; the scent of rain was prominent. Under all circumstances, it was a scent Uruha adored, loved even. It was the scent of all his favorite people - his mother, his father, his sisters, and all the people he’d ( Read more... )

gazette, fanfiction, kai x uruha

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bauci March 10 2009, 20:44:13 UTC
Really pretty.

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kawasakininja March 11 2009, 00:31:56 UTC
Unusual, liked the bit about the scent of rain.

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cateris April 2 2009, 00:46:36 UTC
I remember how special I felt that day and how I jumped on the ceiling with joy :)

This was a really melancholic and touching piece of writing. I loved Uruha's perspective and the way we feel his emotions compressed between the walls of the motel's hallway. The simplicity of the story's flow also adds dros of realism and makes it more vivid this way.

*smiles* The end brings happiness to my little soul :)

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