Comments | chizuko313: The Right Ear Piercing: (revised and much longer)

chizuko313

The Right Ear Piercing: (revised and much longer)

Jul 19, 2011 13:39

Title: The Right Ear Piercing
Author: Chizuko313
Rating: PG-13
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Puck/Kurt
Genre: Romance/Angst
Warning: Extreme fluff, unbeta-ed, sexual situations, and OOC Kurt
Spoilers: everything that is out is fair game
Disclaimer: I do not own Glee or any of its lovely characters. This is a work of fiction and all personalities and scenes ( Read more... )

puckurt, slash, pg-13, one-shot

Comments 4

lillian_raven August 3 2011, 11:41:17 UTC

Sry that you need so wait so long for my answer! I didn't have much time for fanfics in the last days/weeks.

I'm not sure if you also post a link to this in puckurt or gleeslash but you totally should do this.

For a first fic it's really good! Especially the first half is great. Puck's history and thoughts are very understandable and well written. Your Kurt is a little bit... too insecure in my opinion. But maybe I only see this because Kurt is a BAMF in my mind. *g*

Nevertheless a great fill! Thank you. :)

chizuko313 August 7 2011, 20:12:49 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I find that their personalities in Glee wasn't very consistant and that from season one to two they had drastic differences in character for both of them. So it can be hard to write a personality that is believable when in Glee I'm not sure about where the directors were taking Kurts's character in becoming a bashful virgin-prude. I do like Puck a lot though and I really enjoyed fleshing out his character. Kurt seems to me only badass as a front but someone who is truely insecure about where he stands with others he doesn't know.

I did post in the Puckurt forum but when I first posted it the story was awful. I redid it to this version but only edited my post in the forum. So I don't know if anyone went back to read this version.

Anyway glad you got to read my fill. Thank you for your read! :)

lillian_raven August 13 2011, 09:22:25 UTC

Yeah, that is really a problem. Because of that I often use the (Puckurt-fanon)-characterization of Puck and Kurt or use my own opinion.

Try it and post it another time! Only so you get more reviews and helpful critic. :)

pyretofsweden August 11 2011, 20:20:30 UTC

Yay! So much better than the first attempt! =) But you still need to work on it a little bit more. Get all those pesky spelling and grammatical errors ( ... )