Aww it was all sweet until the "Don't" I can't wait for Ollie to break down her walls!!!!!! And I especially can't wait for her to find out about GA!!! Great job bb !!!!!!
This is really good ! I love seeing how Oliver is just human and fragile with his fears, his doubts... And I love the evolution of their relationship. Now, it's not just about sex anymore. And I'm thinking maybe this is why Chloé says "Don't". She's afraid because they begin to have feeling for each other. Can't wait to read next part!
And that is the beginning of a wonderful relationship. Oliver would be confused for awhile since this is new to him but he will get there and I wonder what he will do to break down the walls of one Chloe Sullivan
So I lied... I spent all night writing a paper and I still need to finish it, but breaks are always necessary.
(excuse me while I recap my thoughts for the last couple of updates)
Let me just say, for your first smut attempts (if I remember correctly), you're a lot more adventurous than I thought you'd be. Granted, I haven't seen the movie (it's on a very long list), but I know enough about it to say... wow. I'm not exactly the authority you want giving you kudos on this, but I am anyway.
But even the progression of the feelings, the slow stepping into "whatever it's called" ;)... I think you have a great handle on that too.
*sigh* Have to go back to said-paper, but good luck with all of your stories.
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I love seeing how Oliver is just human and fragile with his fears, his doubts...
And I love the evolution of their relationship. Now, it's not just about sex anymore. And I'm thinking maybe this is why Chloé says "Don't". She's afraid because they begin to have feeling for each other.
Can't wait to read next part!
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(excuse me while I recap my thoughts for the last couple of updates)
Let me just say, for your first smut attempts (if I remember correctly), you're a lot more adventurous than I thought you'd be. Granted, I haven't seen the movie (it's on a very long list), but I know enough about it to say... wow. I'm not exactly the authority you want giving you kudos on this, but I am anyway.
But even the progression of the feelings, the slow stepping into "whatever it's called" ;)... I think you have a great handle on that too.
*sigh* Have to go back to said-paper, but good luck with all of your stories.
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