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nienna87 March 17 2012, 18:13:56 UTC
Seriously? I feel Oliver's frustration. I wanted to punch Lucy myself with all her cryptic crap. I get her point of view too and how she's protecting family, but Oliver wouldn't have gone through all this to find her for no reason. I liked Bart's comment about family not always being blood. Obviously Oliver cares way more than Clark who hasn't done a thing to look for Chloe...C'mon help the guy out a little! I don't blame Ollie for being pissed. The suspense in this is killing me, no joke! C'mon Ollie you can figure out the next clue! Lovely update CS, I'm still enjoying this story even though I'm sucky at reviewing. Can't wait to see where you take us next :)

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theoctober713 March 18 2012, 20:42:22 UTC
this is killing me, so close and so far, i feel it... this is not the end!!! i love it
i have a lot to read (i was very busy lately)... later!!

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deliuzzo March 20 2012, 13:57:41 UTC
Hello, while I am sorry for my bad English!
I found your story when he was already 30 chapters, but I decided to read it anyway.
Sorry if I reviewed it before but I made ​​a lot of problems because I did not want to offend you.
The story is very nice but I miss too much time passes and Chole from chapter to chapter. Should I re-read the last chapters to remember.
Excuse my sincerity!
Despite this I love the way you described Oliver and I hope to each new chapter you can find Chloe, I'm terribly curious.
So I will continue to follow you because you write really well.
Sorry again for my English.

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chloesilvers March 20 2012, 22:21:49 UTC
Trust me, it makes a huge difference to read the first thirty chapters, especially later on.

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