A Crowd Is Not Company, 2/3

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Part One

Comments

[oxoniensis]

I love that this is going in directions I hadn't expected. And now, sadly, I must sleep, and come back to it tomorrow.

[ladyseraph_756]

Oh wow, enjoying this immensely. There's so much to love with this.

[forochel]

ASLDKAJLSJALSIEJLKJ I take back the Laura Ingalls Wilder thing. *WAILS*

[pinocytosis]

I think one thing amazing thing about this turn of events is how Trombley's aimless but energetic quest for random bloodshed is so purely male, and unfettered by bonds to anyone, and then Brad, who is arguably more male and more capable of destruction than Trombley, has his hands tied because he's got this family depending on him, and thus far they have all been a 'burden', and gahhhh I want his Civilization to pay off-- I want Nate to save him and complement him in such a way that they can overcome all obstacles T__T and that goodness and loyalty be rewarded instead of continually be a liability...
And also, ah, I will be so sad if Waltbaby succumbs in the next part ;__;

[ampr]

Very interesting part!