[pic fic]hard to say goodbye

[choclavenderjm]

I was in the verge of completing this fic in this chapter but i have thought how my master Jaceni always tells me: make the transition subtle. This will be the turning point of the story and I hope I am not getting an X for this. But if ever I didn't meet your expectations for the story and I made you confuse, my apologies.

Comments

[jaceni]

ROFL with the comment about subtly and me being your master! XD Funny cookie, funny. XD But, I'm no master, so don't call me that. :P

Yes, appreciate greatly that you didn't have them kissing in this chapter after only meeting so shortly. I like how you're evolving their feelings and even if they seem fast it's natural to some people to fall in love that fast, so no worries there. The fact that they still haven't confessed to each other helps a lot in the subtly too and I'm happy you're taking your time with this. To me it doesn't seem too rushed and definitely is interesting. I'm intrigued at how Jae will manage to escape his seemingly powerful Uncle and what's going to happen next. ^___^ It would've been awesome if you had time pass before Jae fell that deep in love, but understand that he's not exactly in control of his life and that it plays a part to his rash decisions.

Can't wait for the next part. Very interesting. The pics for when Jae turn gangster like were awesome by the way. ^_____^ See you.

thanks for the long comment

[choclavenderjm]

jac, he has his granddad and not uncle.lol.yeah i felt sad about him not having a brighter future. in my next chap, they will be old enough..will their love survive? i want to have a video for that but i think it will be difficult for me.

thanks again for your comprehensive and constructive comments. i truly appreciate it.

[chdairkld]

omg they are being separated for real now TTT_TTT. the scene was scary: jaejoong being dragged away.

but because it got serious like this, that means their relationship will go to the next level *excited*

i really want to see Changmin in action to save him and also to see the pictures haha.

next level

[choclavenderjm]

yeah next level is more exciting..action packed..hopefully. angst and pain combined..hope it isnt too sad.