Drabbles - If I close my eyes forever, will it all remain the same?

May 15, 2009 01:39

Title: If I close my eyes forever, will it all remain the same? [Four Drabbles]
Author: choco_dreamer
Characters: Chuck, Blair, Serena, Nate
Rating: G
Word count: 400
A/N: Pre-season one. Written for gossip_girl100 challenge #11, prompt: Blast from the past

If I close my eyes forever, will it all remain the same? [Four Drabbles] )

character: serena van der woodsen, pairing: nate/blair, character: blair waldorf, character: nate archiblad, fandom: gossip girl, character: chuck bass, fanfiction

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sugarskyhigh May 14 2009, 16:05:35 UTC
oh i love these! short, yet all sweet! the characterization's perfect! :)

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choco_dreamer May 14 2009, 16:06:55 UTC
eee comments already :D *hugglesyou* thank you! :)

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7gifts May 14 2009, 16:46:06 UTC
LMAO, mini Nate's drabble was hilarious. Especially the last two paragraphs:

She stomps off and he sighs again, staring after her. Now she was going to be in a bad mood the whole afternoon and make him watch some old movie over and over again.

He shuts his eyes and makes a quick prayer hoping that the ducks would come back, soon.

I can just picture Blair and Nate in this scenario.

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choco_dreamer May 14 2009, 23:48:21 UTC
lol, nate's drabble was the easiest to write actually - his feelings aren't so deep :P XD i'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

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dae_dreemer May 14 2009, 16:50:44 UTC
These are precious! ♥ SO wonderful. You captured each of them perfectly. All the qualities that make them work and fail! *loves them*

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choco_dreamer May 14 2009, 23:49:21 UTC
eeee i'm so happy you think i captured all their qualities :D *huggles you* i always never sure with drabbles how much of the characterisation comes thru ><

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noirreigne May 14 2009, 18:01:24 UTC
You captured each of the characters beautifully. I loved these little bits of insight.

I think I love mini-Chuck the most followed by Nate and the ducks. :D

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choco_dreamer May 14 2009, 23:50:45 UTC
i'm so happy you think the characters are in character - i'm never sure so it's good to get feedback :D i'm glad you enjoyed them bb!

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yankeesam32935 May 14 2009, 18:23:15 UTC
Great Job, friend!!! I love Nate's the best, that was just so funny. Especially the last line but overall a fantastic job with all of them. Chuck's was sad but amazing also. LOVE!!!

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choco_dreamer May 14 2009, 23:51:25 UTC
eeee i made you laugh :D *hugglesyou* i'm so happy you enjoyed them hun!

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