[FiC]: Moon Going Down (Dean/Castiel, Adult)

Apr 14, 2011 11:08

Title: Moon Going Down
Author: nyoka @ chocolate_muse
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Count: ~3,500
Disclaimer: Supernatural belongs to the CW and Kripke. I own nothing and no one.
Notes: Early S5. For my spn_30snapshots table to the prompt moon. Title from Charlie Patton. Beta thanks to the lovely maerhys.
Summary: Somewhere in Nebraska at the end of the road, it's the darkest night ( Read more... )

fandom: supernatural, genre: slash, challenge: spn_30snapshots, type: one-shot, pairing: dean/castiel

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direbanshee April 14 2011, 20:56:15 UTC
guh! so hot and bittersweet and the imagery was just gorgeous. lovely fic, hun

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nyoka April 14 2011, 20:59:59 UTC
Thank you!! I'm so incredibly pleased that this fic worked for you, especially the imagery!

Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely comment! <3

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dotfic April 14 2011, 21:05:04 UTC
This is vivid and tactile, bitter and hopeful. They're both so heartbreakingly them--I love how you write them, you cut right down into their dynamic. It makes me want to flail at you in a comment. <3

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nyoka April 14 2011, 21:35:22 UTC
Oh, bb, your feedback is so appreciated. Thank you so much. I'm so glad the way I write D/C works for you and that it feels like *them.* That's so important to me and I'm so happy if it comes through in the fic for you.

Again thank you so much for your words and your all your awesome support! <33333

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prongsy April 14 2011, 21:07:05 UTC
Dude, I haven't finished yet, love it thus far, but CHAPEL HILL?!?!?!? AS IN UNC?!!??!?! IF SO, I LOVE YOU FOREVER!!!!!! GO HEELS! <3<3

Ok, now to finish up!

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prongsy April 14 2011, 21:14:31 UTC
Finished! That was beautiful and haunting and oh so right. Well done!

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nyoka April 14 2011, 21:38:04 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comment! I'm really so glad you enjoyed this fic! <3

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nyoka April 14 2011, 21:37:29 UTC
Haha! Chapel Hill FTW. I use to live in Durham so I have a special love for that area, even if I just mention the city in passing in the story. It's totally my story canon that Dean and Cas first hooked up here! Hee! <33

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smilla02 April 14 2011, 21:07:13 UTC
This is so beautiful, love. I adore everything about it: from Dean's doubts and honesty, to Castiel's fear that he's not enough. And of course this is hot like burning. UNF!

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nyoka April 14 2011, 21:40:06 UTC
Thank you bb! I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this fic! I'm especially excited Dean's doubts worked for you, as well as Castiel's fears.

These two, I swear. The things they do to me <3333

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strangeandcharm April 14 2011, 21:15:15 UTC
Oh wow, this was beautiful. I love how you describe their surroundings and there's such a strong sense of reality in your words that you can almost taste and smell everything that's going on.

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nyoka April 14 2011, 21:42:24 UTC
Oh, thank you! ! I'm beyond thrilled you enjoyed this fic, especially the descriptions and the language.

Again thank you so much for reading and for your lovely f/b! It's so appreciated ♥

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