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Junk of the Heart

Feb 23, 2016 14:00

Title: Junk of the Heart
Medium(s) Used: word “antique”
Pairing: Seunghoon/Taehyun
Length: 8k
Rating: R
Warning: drinking, implied sex
Summary: Taehyun likes vintage and Seunghoon likes him.
Author's Note: It’s been a very long time since I’ve written anything. This was a challenge but I’m glad I was able to participate. Thank you to the mods for ( Read more... )

round: 2016, rating: r, p: taehoon, !fics

Comments 3

anonymous February 23 2016, 15:08:57 UTC

i seriously think you should write more, authornim. i enjoyed reading this fic so much - totally digging your witty, funny and smoothly-flowing style. i am always amazed by people who can write so that the fic flows evenly and along with that are able to catch the reader's eye and even be funny along the way, it's something i admire a lot (because i am not good at that and i think it's something so good to find in a story). and yes i found this in your fic, and it was totally awesome ( ... )

anonymous February 24 2016, 05:54:26 UTC

I don't know where to start!!!!! This is the best fic in this exchange so far! From the dirty witty humor, the flow of the story, the way you portrayed the characters (can I just mention how much I loved Mino? And Seungwan? All of them actually. They all had their charm and all of them cracked me up), TO THE WAY IT ENDED? They were something to expect seeing the evolution of seunghoon's and taehyun's relationship, but oh boy I wasn't ready for those kisses. I particularly loved the people you chose for the side characters (who would have expected Soojung and Eunji to be there? it would be nice seeing seungyoon with those two again some time ;; and the mention of yedam surprised me in a good way too. The decision of names = the most clever)(I'm not very fond of ikon but even the chanwoo/hanbin scene was Genius. Loved it)(AND MINHO X JOOHYUN? OTP!!!!). Poor joohyun tho, Seunghoon wants to unfriend her everywhere. Also, make sure you get your copyrights because "I love dancing with grannies they have so much wisdom to share, fuck you ( ... )

papaya5 August 13 2016, 12:30:36 UTC

I absolutely love this fic! It was incredibly lovely. The banter between Taehyun & Seunghoon just flowed so naturally. The supporting characters were great too. I honestly smiled way too much & way too big while reading this fic! Great work!