Burn Brighter than the Sun

[kocch]

Title: Burn Brighter than the Sun.
Medium(s) Used: word: ink.
Pairing: Seunghoon/Minho, slight Seunghoon/Jinwoo, mentions of Minho/OC, Seunghoon/OC.
Length: 5,1k.
Rating: NC-17.
Warning: Character death (only mentioned, minor characters), mentioned underage drinking, mentioned underage drug use, underage sex (both Minho and Seunghoon are above the

Comments

[lilylilym]

I don't read a lot of Minhoon nc17 or am convinced by detailed smut, but your characterization and contextualization is so good it's believable. The sex isn't empty, not that anything wrong with empty sex, but this encounter has meanings and I can't remember the last time it does both in fics and in real life for me. Also, it's not conventional love either, it's somewhat a crisis-endured tactic, a struggle against inevitable loss, and a resistance to maintain their own childish innocence in a world that kills adults. Great work.

[alectrona19]

I love this! I don't usually read/enjoy smut but I find this piece to be...inviting?
I like how you describe the world they're living -- it gives enough background setting but not too much as to intervene or overly complicate the main plot. And I see the relationship between Mino & Seunghoon as two dysfunctional, troubled person who forgets what kind of fucked up world they have to deal with when they are together. It gives the sex a deep meaning, without you having to elaborate on their feelings during the actions.

Wanting to know whether there's a Kimnam involved once Jinwoo brought him back home though :-)