Jeff and Annie's Page-a-Day Calendar (9/?)

[chocolatmoosepi]

Numero Nueve, Ladies and Gentlemen :)

I feel kinda eh about the flow of this one. It kind of bothers me, but I like the concept enough to keep it.

Peace and Love,
~ Moosey ~

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When Annie Edison came into this world - screaming, and crying, and covered in goo - Jeff Winger was tapping

Comments

[second_shooter]

Ahhhhh this is my favourite drabble so far! I'm in class and have the most ridiculous smile on my face. Everything about this makes me happy and I love the idea of Jeff sitting in class not having a phone to play with.
Great job.

[chocolatmoosepi]

Thank you!

[fangirl_101]

Oh I really like the flow of this one. Going back and forth between the two while they grow separately, and then grow together. It's sooo sweet :D

[chocolatmoosepi]

Aw, thanks :). I guess the rhythm of it just feels a little monotonous to me, but I'm really glad you like it!

[lunarblue21]

Oh that was beautiful!

I loved the symmetry of how their lives paralleled each other and eventually 'fell' together and ended with their wedding. :)