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choi_minju

Special Story with Kira: [Between the Rich & Poor]

Mar 14, 2012 22:15

10:04p.m.

That was the time on the young man's laptop as he laid sideways on the rug in his bedroom.

The young man sighed and searched around the internet before his battery would run low from the laptop. He couldn't help but stop to think about what his schedule for the next two days were in school. Pretty soon, he'd have to sacrifice some time ( Read more... )

fiction, story, classes, random, life, jay park, idea, special project, jonghyun

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vampiregirl_133 March 15 2012, 05:33:51 UTC

Across town another young man laid on the ground in his large bed room. The house was quiet even though his pearnts were home.

His family was more then well off so he never had to worry about money, but he did have to worry about firends.

He didnt have any every person he tried to be friends with seemed to only like him for the money.

That was Kim Jonghyuns issue Friends.

He surfed the net and came across a little inter net chat site logging on he type a silly name maybe i cna make some friends here
He thought logging in under the name Dinopuppy Little did he know that his life was about to change when a certian boy acorsstown logged on as well]

(aww your so sweet the name hehe ^^ and i hope that was ok^^)

[This is more than okay. :D Thank you~] choi_minju March 15 2012, 06:03:15 UTC

"Dinopuppy? The fuck?" Jay mumbled as he noticed the username on tinychat. He couldn't help but laugh. Everything was in English since he was in America.

He couldn't help but wonder why on Earth would someone use a username like that. Meanwhile, his username is Fresh Beezy, which now sounds kind of lame.

Jay decided to chat with him and typed his greeting.

Fresh_Breezy: Hi! Wazzup? ^^

Dinopuppy: Hello~ .....I'm sorry, what?

Fresh_Breezy: LOL Seriously though, what's up?

Jonghyun blinked twice and tilted his head in confusion, typing in his answer.

Dinopuppy: .....the sky?

Fresh_Breezy: ROFL!!! XDDDDD You're funny, man! I like you!

(haha your welcome be warned i might have a little trouble doing it this way im used to the rp way) vampiregirl_133 March 15 2012, 06:09:16 UTC

jong looked conffused and typed back
Dinopuppy I wasent trying to be funny, The sky is up, last time i checked any way.

Jay face palmed either this guy was really dumb or...no he couldent be that dumb even a dummy would have gotten what he ment.

Fresh_Breezy NM. Where you from puppy?

Dinopup Its Dinopup not puppy and Korea

Re: (haha your welcome be warned i might have a little trouble doing it this way im used to the rp w vampiregirl_133 March 15 2012, 06:09:35 UTC

(hes from korea but in amercia ^^)

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[what the heck error message?? and i'm bored at the moment. :P] choi_minju March 20 2012, 04:11:56 UTC

Fresh_Breezy: Wow. 0.0 You got a lot of expensive shit. I don't even have all of that - just one old iPod and an iPad
BlingBling: Is that bad....?
Fresh_Breezy: Nah, man. It's just.... man, your parents must spoil you, huh?
BlingBling: Yeah but I really don't need all this stuff. =.=
Fresh_Breezy: *shrugs* Give it to charity.
BlingBling: But my appa said that charity is just a poor excuse of an organization to give good stuff to useless people....
Fresh_Breezy: THE FUCK. NO. YOUR DADDY IS ON CRACK.
BlingBling: He is?

Jay facepalmed and headdesks before replying to the stupid person online. On the other side of town, Jonghyun tilted his head sideways staring at the screen. "How is my appa on crack? He says that stuff is for the desperate..." he mumbled to himself.

Fresh_Breezy: No - not! Aish, dude, you don't hang out much, do you?
BlingBling: ....not really.....
Fresh_Breezy: Then hang out with me next week.

XD me to ) vampiregirl_133 March 20 2012, 05:07:17 UTC

jjong bit his lip reading it
Blingbling ...um ok but some where crowded ok ^^ not that i dont trust you just i would feel safer.

FreshBreezy ok sure where do you want to meet?

Bling bling Han mall out side sushi sushi at 4 is that ok? any day that is.....do you want me to bring the i pods and you can help me get rid of them? i mean ones not even opened

Jay face palmed god this kid was spoilt

Bling bling and will you explain to me how my appa is on crack?

[HAHAHA OMG JJONG!] choi_minju March 20 2012, 05:19:36 UTC

Jay wasn't sure whether to laugh out loud, disturbing the neighbors, or hit himself so hard for this guy's stupidity.

Fresh_Breezy: You are one weird dude.
Fresh_Breezy: It's a slang term, meaning your appa is so absurd
BlingBling: Ah.....oh.
BlingBling: My bad.
Fresh_Breezy: And you know THAT slang?
BlingBling: hehehehe~

After a moment, they both said their goodbyes and signed off. Jonghyun finally climbed into bed and slept with a happy smile on his face while Jay slept onto his bed as soon as he crashed onto it.

Re: [sherlock teaser photo vampiregirl_133 March 20 2012, 09:19:14 UTC

Jjong awoke the next day still smiling he got up and got dressed for school, he logged on quickly and sent jay a message.
blingbling sence I'm seeing you today I should send you a photo right?

fresh_breezy umm yer that would help

bling bling ok here
He serched and sent the other a photo,wanting to send a cute one but accident sent one key had taken of him mucking around were he was topless.he didn't realize till it was to late.

blingbling Omo *dies of embarrassment* sorry that is the wrong one

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choi_minju March 30 2012, 06:00:55 UTC

"You can start by talking to the head of the orphanage here," Jay suggested as he introduced him to the owner of the orphanage. While Jonghyun was discussing on donating the money, Jay walked over to where the huge teenagers are. He grinned at them and waved.

One of them looked up from a magazine and smiled. "Jaebum hyung!" A skinny pretty boy cried out and lunged himself at Jay. The latter chuckled and hugged him back. "Jokwon-ah, how's it going?" He asked in Korean.

Pretty soon, the rest of the boys hugged him, forming a group hug. Jonghyun noticed after he successfully paid in full cash to the owner of the orphanage, who was very grateful for the children's donation funding. She patted him on the back and gestured him to join the love.

vampiregirl_133 March 30 2012, 06:07:41 UTC

Jonghyun blushed and shook his head
"I dont want to intrude."
He watched some little kids and smiled as one stopped, he got down to talk to the child.
"Hey little guy im joghyun."
"Hi hyung im JIn im four. How old are you?"
"Im 18 so 14 years older then you."
"Ohh do you want to come play?"
He looked up at the lady who nodded to say it was ok and jonghyun smiled.
"Sure lets play."
He was shocked when the young child took his hand but held it gnetly and followed him.

choi_minju March 30 2012, 06:18:08 UTC

After Jay talked to his young friends, one of them named Taecyeon decided to help him go find Jonghyun. He briefly described him as a man who looked like a mix of a dinosaur and a puppy. It took them nearly 15 minutes in the ragged house until they found him playing with Jin, who was fluent in both Korean and English for a 4 year old.

They walked out in the backyard, witnessing Jin play 'Red Light Green Light' with Jonghyun and two other children, another boy and a girl. Taecyeon grinned and patted Jay on the back. "Dude, you finally found a catch. He's good with kids, and on top of that, I think he's - "

"For the last time, I'm not gay. And yes, I'm actually aware that he is." Jay glared at his young friend.

vampiregirl_133 March 31 2012, 07:53:39 UTC

Jonghyun was laughing happily as he played with the children, he looked up to see jay and his friend watching, He blushed and waved a little before turning back to the game.

Taceyeon smiled and waved back before looking at Jay.
"I dont know if your blind or not, But I think he likes you. Likes you more then a friend."
Jay was watching them msiling softly.
"And i know your not gay but you should go for it, Maybe teach the rich kid a thing or two."

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choi_minju April 4 2012, 02:53:12 UTC

Jay excused himself and encouraged everyone to continue eating. He walked outside and sat beside Jonghyun on the steps.

"So....now you know why we have shelters."

vampiregirl_133 April 4 2012, 03:00:54 UTC

Jonghyun started crying he felt terrib for what the kids in there must have gone threw.

choi_minju April 5 2012, 06:07:21 UTC

Jay stared at him in shock and awkwardly patted him on the back. "Come on, little puppy, it's not your fault! They got through it eventually - look at them!" He pointed at the window to prove his point.

Jonghyun turned around and couldn't help but smile. It was like a moving picture of one big family having the best time of their lives. It was what he was mostly missing from his family.

"You're right.... they're doing great...." He turned to the slightly taller man sitting beside him. "It's getting a bit late, we should probably go home?"

vampiregirl_133 April 5 2012, 06:17:33 UTC

Jay nodded.
"let's go say good bye and we can go home"
Jonghyun stood with the other. And went inside with the other boy huggin his new friends good bye.
As they left the shorter looked at his friend.
"hyung..do you want to come to my house? I mean I know we just ate but you could come over for dessert if you want."
Jay looked slightly taken back. Maybe this boy did like him.
"I mean it's ok f you don't sence we just met and all."
Jjong said looking at his shoes
"no I would lOve to would your pearants be ok with it?
Jay asked
"they won't even notice your there most likely."

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choi_minju April 10 2012, 05:37:05 UTC

Jay gasped and held a hand over his mouth. How could - does Key really have the ability?! He looked at Jonghyun wide-eyed while slowly reaching over to trace his scars. Jonghyun's breath hitched and he blushed deeply, wondering what this strange but nice guy was doing to him. He didn't dare to move because he didn't want to scare the other.

Deep down, he really wanted to kiss him.
But he barely knew him.

"Does it hurt even now?" Jay asked tentatively.

vampiregirl_133 April 10 2012, 05:40:46 UTC

He shook his head.
"No not at all, Its a reminder more of my first love weather it be good or bad."
"Id say bad rather then good"
Jay said looking up at the other and Jonghyun shrugged.
"it is what it is, He was my love and he broke my eart nothing i can do about it."
"you really loved him didn't you"
Jay asked softly even though he had no idea how the other could after what he had been put threw.
"I did. he was the first boy i ever fell for."

choi_minju April 10 2012, 06:41:46 UTC

Jay barely realized that Jonghyun was sprawled out over the huge mattress right now. Since the younger man's shirt was riding up, he was able to see his small curvy waist, which matched to a fine woman. His muscles were more defined in person than in the phone camera.

"You fell in love with your best friend?"

Jonghyun nodded sadly, oblivious to the other's stare on his body. He patted the huge space beside him. "Come lie beside me, Jay."

Feeling bad, Jay complied and landed backwards onto Jonghyun's bed. He gasped and groaned, feeling the soft cotton sheets underneath him. He started rolling around on the huge bed, making Jonghyun sit up a bit and laugh at him. "Like the bed, hyung?"

vampiregirl_133 April 10 2012, 06:55:39 UTC

Jay grinned still rolling.
"It feels so nice and comfy so much better then mine"
Jonghyun laughed.
"Its not that good, its just a bed."
Jay grinned at him.
"Ever feel my bed and you will know why."
Jonghyun looked at the other.
"can i come to your house one day hyung?"

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