7 - Just Another Rainy Morning

[chokingsmoker]

Title:               Just Another Rainy Morning
Author:         chokingsmoker
Rating:           NC - 17
Disclaimer:    Not for profit. Fiction.
Pairing:          Yama (Ohno Satoshi and Sakurai Sho)
Word Count: 1,794
Summary:      Satoshi and Sakurai spend a rainy morning together. That’s it. Plot? What’s that? :P

Comments

[chokingsmoker]

Yey, you liked it! I was actually a bit anxious because the story was too wordy.

I love that Sho has that as his ringtone!! xD
I couldn't help it. XD I just had to squeeze that in!

Thanks for reading!

Sugoi!!

[thefrug]

the detail in this story was amazing! You really have a knack for detail, i loved every moment of this story. The imagery was gorgeous! I also loved that you included that they smoke, most people never put it in their stories which I find odd because they do smoke in real life. Well done!

Funny note, at the very end when Sho read the 'interesting story' in the paper and then they were all over each other again: I laughed because I instantly thought of how gay marriage has just been legalized in California - and thats the first thing that came to my mind when I read the ending of this story! Hehe. Again, well done! <333

Re: Sugoi!!

[chokingsmoker]

Wow. Thanks for the lovely comment! And I agree, some of the long non-AU Arashi fiction I've read do not mention any of them smoking. Maybe the writers didn't think it figured in their stories, I don't know.

And the weird thing is I wanted to put that California tidbit in, but couldn't write it without that portion looking too forced. Maybe at the hands of a better writer... *sigh* But I'm so glad you thought of that! Yay!

Thanks again!

[daiichu]

man.
graphic. detailed.
beautiful.

i can't believe how perverted i am.

<3 good job

[chokingsmoker]

Thanks for the short, but beautiful comment!

And if you're a pervert, what does that make me? XD

Thanks for reading!

[daiichu]

LOL. omg us fangirls are all perverts.

anyways you're welcome. <3 I WISH I COULD WRITE SMUT FANFICTION BUT...BUT...-cries-
i get all weirded out if i do it. xDD
i'll just stick to reading other peoples'. i hope you write more!

[chokingsmoker]

LOL. omg us fangirls are all perverts.
*cracks up*

I WISH I COULD WRITE SMUT FANFICTION BUT...BUT...-cries-
i get all weirded out if i do it. xDD
This is, I think, the second porn fanfic I've written in my life. And I got weirded out, too, at first. Didn't stop me, though. XD And I got weirded out with this one, too. And still, it didn't stop me! XD

i hope you write more!
More smut? XXDD I'll definitely try!

Thanks again!

[i_am_zan]

The beauty in this is in the details. Slow, paced and controlled.

I can smell the coffee and feel the languid air about them.

Definitely not porn gone awry.

*loves this*

I forget due to the OhMiya and the Jun crushing how close these two really are.

[chokingsmoker]

Thanks! I love getting comments from you!

This is my third favorite Arashi love team-up [next to Ohmiya, and my OT3, Ohsakumiya!]! And I find it easier to write about them, than say, Ohmiya.

Thanks again!

[xanderave]

My favourite two! YAMA IS ♥♥♥.

[chokingsmoker]

YAMA IS ♥♥♥.

That's true! Sadly, I don't see a lot of Yama fics in this fandom. That's why I shall strive to write more! Nyaha!

Thanks for dropping by!