14 - Night Sounds

[chokingsmoker]

Title:                          Night Sounds
Author:                     chokingsmoker
Pairing, Threesome:Ohmiya (Ohno Satoshi and Ninomiya Kazunari), Sakurai Sho with Aiba Masaki with Matsumoto Jun
Rating:                       NC-17
Word Count:             1,601
Disclaimer:                Not for profit. Fiction.
Notes:                        Written for lilly0  for the

Comments

[i_am_zan]

Oooh man OT5-Arashi-ai ... I have missed your writing my dear. Love hugs and stuff.

Have a good week ahead.

[chokingsmoker]

Hey! I miss you! Have a great week, too!

[lilly0]

SPOT!
I LOVED IT! I will come back later and comment properly <3

[chokingsmoker]

*waits patiently, tries not to fidget*

[lilly0]

GIRL I LOVE THIS! It was sooooooooooooooooooo good!!!! And it was such an awesome, fun and great read <3

First I was a bit wary, because I'm not a die-hard Ohmiya fan and I wondered how much of them would be in this fic. But it was simply awesome! I love the glimpses of Ohmiya, how the secretly left to meet up while the others were still awake. It was hilarious!!

Aiba's comments were beyond awesome! I loled so much at him, how he commented the situation and how Sho was getting more and more...into it :D I love it when Sho is like that... dealing with his feelings and emotions. He is such a cool and stoic character sometimes, so it's nice to see him blunt and full of emotions sometimes. <3

I loved how the tension rose and then suddenly... all of them snapped and jumped each other. It was so fast and happened instinctively - totally awesome!!

(Later, Sho will learn that Satoshi used Kazunari’s dress shirt for post-sex clean up. “It’s white! White!” Kazunari will scream.)LOL

[chokingsmoker]

First, let me just say, that I am seriously so happy and so relieved that you liked this. REALLY, REALLY

[s0mething_blue]

"Sho gets scared that the fierce jump of his heart may have everything to do with lust and fucking and something he doesn’t want to name."<--THIS!

I believe I've mentioned this to you (once? twice? lots of times?) before , but that line, F-E-E-L-I-N-G-S!!!

I know (and you know) that I have not read Arashi fics as much as you would want me to, but this, along with the others you wrote and suggested I read, had me convinced that nothing comes easy (yes, pun intended) to Sho.
And I got all that from reading, what, 90% smut on this one?

Sho-chan, your life is so hard
...................................................................andyou'resoadorableandaylabyuuuuu

~I should be working, I know, I know...ssshhhhh!

[chokingsmoker]

~Hey, you've got to hide your love away...~

Sho is so much fun to write. Maybe that's why I almost always use his POV when I write Arashi fic. I like it when he's floundering, when he's flopping about like fish out of water. Why is this? Maybe because I believe he can triumph in the end. And even if he doesn't win, hey, he's Sho, every experience will help him build character! And because I love him best when he's trying to wrestle with his feelings (~nothing more than feelings...~), he always ends up trapped. But don't worry, he's smart. It'll take him a while but he'll soon realize that struggling is pointless and he'll just go back to enjoying sexy times!

[jade_lil]

THERE ARE TOO MANY AWESOME THINGS IN THIS FIC THAT HAS TO BE MENTIONED. BUT PLEASE LET ME FIRST APOLOGIZE FOR THE CAPS ABUSE BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW HOW TO MAKE THINGS CLEARER.

THIS FIC IS AMAZING, JUST WOW. IT HAS BEEN SO LONG SINCE I'VE READ SOMETHING THAT GAVE ME THE SHIVERS, AND THIS, THIS WAS JUST, ASFHFLAHFLH;A;LI;A /keysmash

LET ME SUM UP THE PARTS WHERE I THINK SHOULD BE MENTIONED, OVER AND OVER.

1. OHMIYA. OH MAN, THESE TWO, I GUESS WE COULDN'T REALLY BLAME SHO FOR ALL THE THINGS HE DID IN THIS FIC, SIMPLY BECAUSE OHMIYA STARTED IT. THIS Fabrics shift, the floorboards creak, and Kazunari’s muffled footfalls can be heard going down the stairs SHO-CHAN'S WAITING FOR IT TO HAPPEN, AND WHY AM I NOT SURPRISED THAT NINO'S THE FIRST ONE TO GO DOWN? AHAHA HAHAHA

[chokingsmoker]

Wow. Thank you for your very wonderful comment and your keysmash. ♥

1. Sho-chan suspected that Ohmiya will do something, he knows them so well. And of course, it was Nino who went downstairs first!

2. Writing this through Sho's perspective was really, really interesting, not to mention funny. Turned on Sho was fun to write!

3. Yay!

4. If Sho and Nino wouldn't die of mortification, I bet Ohno would've told Sho, Stay. I want you to watch. as he slammed into Nino. Hahahahaha!

Coherency, we don't need that here!

Thanks!

Sorry for the multiple edits. I've been up since morning and it's morning again.

[j_sei]

Ah, what's this?
“Sho-chan,” Kazunari says with much difficulty, his voice unevenly loud. “The camera is still rolling.”, this sentence makes all hot moment away and laughter comes. Haha, that's why Ohmiya pair comes down. Can't believe that Sho-chan forget that camera is still roling,

[chokingsmoker]

Sho-chan becomes forgetful when he's horny. :D Actually, not just him, but Jun and Aiba, too! And yes, that was why they went downstairs, not to mention it was a bit cramped upstairs, with all of them in that small bit of space (And really, Ohno just wanted to bend Nino over the sink)!

Thanks!