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2 - Questions

May 07, 2008 23:04

Title: Questions
Author:       chokingsmoker
Rating:        PG (?)
Disclaimer: Not for profit. Fiction.
Pairing:      Model Pair (Aiba Masaki and Matsumoto Jun)
Word Count: 574
Summary:   Masaki thinks of Jun.
Notes:      Special thanks to i_am_zanfor the quick beta-reading and the encouragement!

( You clamp your mouth at the juncture between my neck and shoulder, your teeth nibbling on my skin. )

nakimushi, of rainbows and sparkles, porn writing gone awry

Comments 3

panthera_mort May 21 2008, 21:48:49 UTC

oof! angry~
O_O

chokingsmoker May 22 2008, 00:52:54 UTC

what? O_o

thanks for reading, dear!

panthera_mort May 25 2008, 16:35:51 UTC

oh no, i meant the atmosphere for the fic is angry
*embarrassed for not explaining that clearly*

you know what,i have a tendency to read a few lines at the end before officially start reaidng from the top.
when i saw the 'I light a cigarette..., I immediately thought it was nino.
*fails*
(^^;)

oof, gomen, randomly commenting again. eurgh.