1 - Enough

Apr 06, 2008 01:07



Title:               Enough
Author:          chokingsmoker
Pairing:          Ohmiya (Ohno Satoshi and Ninomiya Kazunari), Yama (Ohno Satoshi and Sakurai Sho)
Rating:           PG [?]
Disclaimer:    Not for profit. Fiction.
Word Count:  2,028
Summary:      Sakurai Sho thinks about Ohno Satoshi.
Notes:             I tried to write Sho as the deep thinking Keio boy I've ( Read more... )

sos, of rainbows and sparkles, porn writing gone awry, mogura

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everystarrfall April 6 2008, 10:43:29 UTC
Tbh I really don't ship Shohno. I tend to just stick to Ohmiya and Sakuraiba. I saw this when you first posted it, and almost read it, but then passed it up. But then I woke up about half an hour ago with a killer headache and decided that fic (and the tylenol with codene they prescribed, along with four other medications >_<;; Ugh, being sick sucks) would help cure this. So I came and read this, and I'm really glad I did. ^_^ Maybe they'll have to start putting warnings on the labels. Warning: May cause increased craving for fanfiction, esp. for pairings that you don't normally ship. Buuuuut this was wonderfully written. *luffs* It's so ... Sho. Like, you've really got him down in this fic, along with all the members, really. I always think it's the little things that really make up a fic, and I love all the little details that you put throughout this because it makes it much more ... realistic? I dunno what the word is I'm looking for there, but like, I can read it and notice all these little details that make me smile (as has been ( ... )

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chokingsmoker April 6 2008, 11:26:59 UTC
thanks for reading and commenting! i'm finding out that i love comments, particularly long ones! arashi fans are terrific!

i hope you do get well soon and am glad this fic didn't make you sicker. >_~
and hurray because you found this beautiful! *luffs back* i tried writing sho and arashi as i imagined they would be and it's great knowing it worked for you! yey another! yes, yes, i agree with you--While I love fics that make up a scenario and put Arashi in it, I *really* adore the ones that take something that actually happened, and then explain the why of it all in their fics. i love arashi fics as a rule, love them more if they feature something that actually happened, love them best when these somethings are interpreted in various adorable imaginable ways ( ... )

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13miku April 6 2008, 23:32:07 UTC
Wow! This fic really was original and very interesting indeed. I liked the feel of it; it felt real, the emotion tied it all together. I don't read much ShoxOhno, but I usually really like it when I do.

Everyone seemed really in-character here, especially Sho.

Wonderful job!! This piece has inspired me to write my own~Please write more! Ganbatte ne ^__^v

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chokingsmoker April 7 2008, 10:43:18 UTC
yey! thanks! my initial reaction when i learned of ShoxOhno was "huh?!" and after long months of watching arashi interact, i began to think that ShoxOhno is highly likely. thankfully, the first fic i read of them was really good.

although i ship ohmiya, sakuraiba and shohmiya, and pairings involving ohno, i find any team up--pairing, threesome, orgy--wonderful as long as it's written well. hell, i think arashi fics are love, as a rule.

i was wondering if i got the characters right, and again, i thank you for saying that it worked for you.

oh, i shall be waiting for your stories!

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andersenmom April 7 2008, 19:05:53 UTC
I really enjoyed this - I can't believe I didn't comment when I read it!

I like your Sho. He's very real to me. Nice job.

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chokingsmoker April 7 2008, 19:55:58 UTC
thanks for the lovely comment!

i'm glad you enjoyed reading this. and i'm also very relieved to learn that the sho in this story worked for you.

thanks again!

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sundaecone April 8 2008, 04:59:27 UTC
Of course everyone wants a piece of Leader. Of course. *knowing smirk*
Who can resist those hips when they swirl? That sexy (d-did I just say SEXY?! *dead*) voice? The cute pout?
NO. ONE. CAN. RESIST. LEADER.

And the worst part is... he doesn't even know how irresistable he is. Ugh!

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chokingsmoker April 8 2008, 07:35:43 UTC
thanks for the comment!

of course, everyone wants Leader! those hips, that voice, those lips, those hands! *hyperventilates* and i agree with you, no one can resist him, but it's not like anyone is trying to and even if they can, they won't. because OHNOSATOSHIISLOVE! yey!

that he is actually clueless about his effect on all of us makes him all the more irresistible, i find.

leader, why so pretty? why so wonderful? *sniffs*

*sigh*

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mainichi_muri April 8 2008, 20:54:11 UTC
okay, so the first thing that actually struck me was "OOH. NICE FONT." xDDDD *brickeddd*

but that aside! you have an awesome way of writing! it's really original in the sense that you include all the thought process in those brackets and it's like something I would think of doing too, but I don't simply because I'm afraid I can't execute it properly. oh well.

anyway! I was highly amused at kegom's comment thread. XD OHNO FANS UNITE. uwahhh. I dunno, I find it really rare to find fellow ohno fans! *_* most I know are Jun fans and Sho's too I guess.. HAHAHA. truly, I like all of them but I think, riida is the absolute best because he does such weird, crazy and cute things without even having the intention of doing such things purely for attention (which he end up getting a lot of! ^^v) unlike a certain Kazu-chan

oh dear, I think I rambled about endless things that had nothing to do with you fic but more on why Ohno is such a compelling character. AHAHAHA. *shott* forgive me?

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chokingsmoker April 9 2008, 12:34:56 UTC
okay, so the first thing that actually struck me was "OOH. NICE FONT." xDDDD *brickeddd*

good of you to notice! i'm a big fan of arial narrow! XD no, really. seriously.

thanks for the generously lovely comment! how many times have i said [or written, for that matter] that arashi fans are terrific? i love this fandom!

anyway! I was highly amused at kegom's comment thread.

so am i!

YES, OHNO FANS UNITE! WE HAVE NOTHING TO LOSE BUT OUR SANITY!!! *shot multiple times*

when i first lurked around, almost all arashi fans i saw around were jun's [most of them are so nice and work hard at translating arashi materials, writing porn fanfics, screen capping arashi shows and such]--maybe because i was jun-baited and you know the adage on birds with the same feathers [birds of the same feather are the same birds together. ahahahahaha! *shot again*]--but these days ohno fans are active in the fandom. congratulations, ohno fans! yey!

truly, I like all of them but I think, riida is the absolute best because he does such weird, crazy and cute ( ... )

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