Keep you inside my heart

[choon_hee]

Disclaimer : Shinee isn't mine :D I just own the plot 
Pairing : Onkey(past) Ontae 
Rating : G
Summary : when someone people died they life with the memories in you. that's why Jinki can't forget about his past love but, someone change him. someone named Lee Taemin
A/N: thank you for the beautiful pic from Yura Hyung sorry it's unbetaned .___. pardon

Comments

[melalocket]

T___________T
love this !
its so beautiful !!!

[choon_hee]

unnie
thank you for reading this failed pieces I never thought you'll read this .___.
lol
thank you anyways XDD

[mazokuwithwings]

ACK i don't like ontae, but they're really cute here >.<

so saaaaaaaaaadddddd
it supposed to be broken!onkey but they still love each other so it's not broken rite?
i accept the fact that minnie is jinki's new boyfriend here but jinki can't love him more than he loves kibum mwahahahah *cough* i'm too biased *cough*
i'm touched that kibum died for saving a little girl life ;^;
beautiful. hwaiting!!!

[choon_hee]

lmao
sorry :DDD
I like onkey and ontae at the same times ==a

omoo you know meee lol
yup this isn't a broken onkey cause they STILL love each other and Jinki didn't want to forget about Kibum either.
so it's still onkey

thank you :DD

[doongie]

SPOTTTTT!
I'll be back (Y)~~~ /sings and tries to shuffle like 2PM
Be back in the morning to comment with a clear mind so I do your fix justice,lol! ☺

[doongie]

Omg sorry to only comment only now, my safari's been dying on me the whole timeeeee :<
Anyway, back to the fic.
You have no idea how heart wrenching it was to read about Jinki longing for Kibum so badly, and that scene of Kibum saying his last words to Jinki after the accident.... T^T Ouch.
I especially liked how you made Taemin into this gutsy kid who isn't afraid of rejections, but instead, dealt with it with a determined attitude. And it did pay off in the end, didn't it? 8) Oh and ofc Taemin's cute in here like how he usually is irl, hehehehehe ^_____^
LOL AND JJONG; hilarious and entertaining just like the real jjong. And I see Dino!Jjong coming into play here~~~
"come on jonghyun hyung already in his destructive mode if you don’t come now."
ROFLMAO. OH JJONG, YOU.... :3

On a whole, I found this really heart warming in the end, and it's no doubt a great read!☺
Thanks for sharing!

"Don’t forget about him, don’t reject your love for me cause I just want to stand at the same place with him, not replacing him.”
♥♥&hearts

[choon_hee]

if I can give you an award you'll get the comment of the month
lol
thank youu
your comment make me aaaw >o<

I want to make umm
something new??
Taemin is kid who have the guts here lol
and good kid will have their present at the end :DD lol

jonghyun is jonghyun xDDD

thank you very much for reading and comment this fic..
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