Yours

Aug 05, 2010 17:26

Disclaimer : shinee isn't mine :D I only own the plot
Pairing        : Onew/Key
Rating         : Pg
Alphabet    : Y from My ABC
Summary   : Only Jinki who have the right key to Kibum heart
Beta           : Thank you for my dongsaeee shineesosexxiii  for helping me write this story love you soo much bb 8DD
A/N            : sorry for the failed :| I try to make it ( Read more... )

!rating: pg, !abc, !shinee, !fic, !onkey

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choon_hee August 5 2010, 10:27:12 UTC
spooot for my dongsae shineesosexxiii :DDD

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shineesosexxiii August 5 2010, 18:14:17 UTC
......I RIKE DIS FICTION.

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choon_hee August 6 2010, 23:08:20 UTC
LOL LOL LOL
omooo cute jonghyun &hearts &hearts

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choon_hee August 5 2010, 10:28:34 UTC
spoot for my owl unnie owlbee :DD =3= still mad about your message LOL

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owlbee August 5 2010, 11:14:44 UTC
GOSH BB. YOU ALMOST GET UNNIE A HEARTATTACK HEEREEE!!! *clenchs my chest*

..because half way i read i thought my onkey was gonna broken and i'm just prepare myself to cries in corner -.-
but then you make it a superhappy-ending, YAYYY! *glomps&tackles you on ground* xDD
woa..you manage to wrote a twisted plot here~
another improvement from you bb *claps*

as for my fave line it would be this
For me, a miracle is something that happens when we think that every chance is gone. We never know what will happen next. But, I believe miracles always make me happy
i would not left any weird-rant this time, because this line pretty much sum-up what i want to say~^^

LOL, dont liee..*pokes*
i know you love me too much to be mad at me,.kekeke

thank you sooo much for sharing this bb, i've been wait ages for your update *pouts*
but i know you've been busy with school..so AJA AJA FIGHTIING DONGSAENGIEE!!
ILY SMSMSMSM!! *HUGS*SMOOCHES

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choon_hee August 6 2010, 23:13:24 UTC
O.o

LOL dont cry it's enough fgr me to make some angst story ==""
is this an angst story?? =="
heee??
what is twisted plot?? =="
I just know a plot not a twisted plot =="

=3= yeah I still love you even thought you almost breaking my heart too =3=
yeah school is killing me so so sloooowly DDDx

love you toooo :P
but after taemin he still the first in my heart LOL

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owlbee August 7 2010, 02:51:34 UTC
twisted plot is a plot where the ending is unexpected or turn out really different from what the readers guess before.... or when there's a drastic change in some part of the story :)

yahh..you should love unnie first!! -.-

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choon_hee August 5 2010, 10:30:17 UTC
spoot for my sister in law kuro_kakeru

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kuro_kakeru August 5 2010, 11:09:50 UTC
Oooooooooh~ So this is the one you've been talking about~! :))=))

Bb~! It's really cute! And no, it's not a fail :)) I think it was kinda cute that Kibum didn't know that he was getting married to Jinki all that time... kekeke...

Go away from angst for a little while =)) Write more fluff :))=)) That's a command from your sister-in-law.. Or else I'll capture your husband... Btw, say 'hi' to your gorgeous brother for me! XD XD

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choon_hee August 6 2010, 23:15:31 UTC
yuuuup :DDDD

well actually I feel kibum father a little weird LOL
why didnt he said jinki name?? ==

I'll try sir (suddenly feel like in a military school) LOL
but I cant help to put some angst in my story :DDD

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choon_hee August 5 2010, 10:37:27 UTC
spot for mankadi unniee
I dont know you want it or not >

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mankadi August 6 2010, 05:39:03 UTC
thanks for hte spot bb :DD
omgoosh!! it was sad in the begining~cuz its like he remember what happened to him with jinki~i thought because its kibum memories~that jinki left him~or worse~DIED DX
and ugh~ stupid key's father :33
he scaring my baby for nothing~ii actually beleived it ;/
oh wel as long as they getting married in the end 8D
thanks for sharing bb~
wriite mooar <33 :P
ily :)

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choon_hee August 6 2010, 23:21:13 UTC
I cant kill jinki :XXX
he's my husband anyway LOL
agreee I still didnt get it why Kibum father act so stupid in here ==" (Blame my brain)

thank you for reading and comment unnie :D

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choon_hee August 5 2010, 12:05:15 UTC
spot for my onew(?)mandarin_orchid

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mandarin_orchid August 5 2010, 12:26:03 UTC
Hey, don't scratch that onew part >:| i am ur onew after all kekeke. Love this <3 i thought that ur going to make jonghyun to appear haha.

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choon_hee August 6 2010, 23:23:28 UTC
I see tofuhoooo *_______*
*closing my eyes now*
I make jonghyun as a cameo LOL

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mandarin_orchid August 8 2010, 03:11:56 UTC
yaha! i did that on purpose. so you always have tofuho in you comment ;)

poor jonghyun :( i thought you like jonghyun now. so the girly taemin can be mine :P

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