I know it's depressing. Get over it.

[chooseausername]

First off, let me just say that I'm so sorry that I don't know how to use an LJ cut.  This is a short story I'm working on, though despite the name, it's a little long. Take your time reading it.  It's not entirely cleaned up; there are adjustments that need to be made.  However, I would really, really appreciate criticism.  Leave me a comment

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[anonymous]

andrew, this is by far the best thing you have every written, at least from my point of view. its probably because im your brother and i know exactly where this came from, but it was such a well written story. At the risk of being labeled a pussy, this made me seriously bawl. i think it was just the idea of losing pepere and how much im miss everyone. whatever it was, i found it very emotional and i hope you keep writing things like it.

love ya
-justin