Okay...this is the second time I am writing this...stupid server. Anyway, "the feel of fishnet tights but you're a thousand miles away" lines are great. The alliteration is good, and it is more of what you are not saying that gives it a good feel. I like. I do have one prob. I keep getting stuck on the "a morning glory in the middle of the night" line. It sounds like a song lyric to me...it's a good line though, jewel would kill for it...watch your back! Love,Stacey
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Morning glory in the middle of the night. Mmmm.
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