Killing Me Slowly - Part Two (of Five)

[chosenone]

Title: Killing Me Slowly
Part: 2 of 5
Author: chosenoneSummary: “Our doubts are traitors, and make us lose the good we oft might win, by fearing to attempt

Comments

[kiaforrest]

enjoying this!

Especially liked: he saw Kaylee’s eyes light up more than once, which meant there was serious discussion about some engine part or another going on. and Just…grab my arm and try to look wife-like.

I like how you're setting this up to loop around to the Teaser :grin:

[chosenone]

I'm glad you're liking it!

I can't seem to help myself from giving the characters in this 'verse lines to toss off that just make me, as the writer, giggle. That wife line was one of them.

Thanks for reviewing.

[xbex]

I'm addicted to this fic! So beautifully written (I'm green with envy) and really great, subtle Kaylee/Mal going on too.

[chosenone]

I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Like any person in their right mind, I can only stand subtlety for so long... ;-)