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chou_shikku

Payment (Akutsu x Dan / PoT)

Aug 11, 2006 14:05

Payment

author chou_shikku
fandom Prince of Tennis
pairing Akutsu x Dan
rating Nc-17
notes Damn sparklespiff for planting the AkuDan in my head

edit Beta=luff. Comment if you'd like to help out.

( You pay what you owe. )

prince of tennis, writing, akudan

Comments 10

djc3791 August 11 2006, 22:05:03 UTC

Gah... Love! AkutsuDan Love!

More yes?

Please!

DJC
who is usually better at english than this, but brain is melted...

chou_shikku August 12 2006, 00:14:52 UTC

Awwww ♥

hahaha I think I've wasted all my AkuDan thoughts for a while. Maybe a small smutty drabble or two since I enjoy putting them together sexually though ♥

Thanks for reading!

vaultedthewall August 12 2006, 00:09:39 UTC

...h-hot. ♥

chou_shikku August 12 2006, 00:13:58 UTC

OMG! I adore your icon! So cute!!!

Thanks for reading ♥

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chou_shikku August 12 2006, 01:55:02 UTC

hahaha well that was more suspended disbelief in my own mind that he'd act normally. I always hope Dan rolls with the punches errrm handjobs.
LOL yeah I love the pink underwear part, maybe I'm just a dork and like the idea of Akutsu unknowingly walking around in something as girly as pink underwear all day.
Does that make me bad?

Thanks for reading ♥

todaythesamesky August 12 2006, 01:12:18 UTC

More AkuDan! Though might I suggest getting a beta? There were a few little grammatical errors in here that might have easily been caught if you had someone to look it over for you. I know I can hardly function without mine. :)

chou_shikku August 12 2006, 01:53:29 UTC

LOL I'd love one. Actually before I posted I was thinking... gah I need a second pair of eyes since the bloody thing was 3,000 words long ^^;; I was hoping to find someone who liked both PoT slash and tennis slash, hopefully I can hunt a few peeps down! Do you know where to ask about these things?

todaythesamesky August 12 2006, 02:00:20 UTC

A comm, perhaps? A note attached to some fanfiction will probably work. That's how I found mine, I think. Though it was a long long time ago, hahaha.

shiva_chan August 12 2006, 05:24:38 UTC

I love Aku/Dan...

If only because... I love Dan being the only one who can get away with so much. Akutsu seems to hate the entire world and everyone in it, but when it comes to Dan...

It's just so cute.

Especially when Dan isn't QUITE so innocent as lots of people make him out to be.

This was excellent. Hope to see more.

Totally loved the pink underwear. *cackle*