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[chris227]

well i hav another peom- sum of u mite not get it but i want u 2 critique it ne ways....put what you think on a comment... thanks, i know its really long but please help me and tell me what you think shud change * i.e words that wud sound better

Comments

[anonymous]

ur poem is amazing!! Dont change a thing!!

xoxo

<3 Sonia

[mxpxguitarchika]

chris, that was soo good, i dont think anyhitng needs to be changed. and im so serious do u mind if i put it in my mine?? but credit u.
ami

Steph

[anonymous]

hey chris that was an awesome poem, i cant wirite poems for crap geez oh peets its really good and that's all the 'input' (didnt have another word for it lol) but yea its so kool

[anonymous]

umm chris you don't need to change anything.. what an amazing poemm. honestly.. i think everyone has their own like.. my world.. so there should be nothing to change about yours..just because everyones are different...

am i making any sense..?

don't change a thing. btw there's nothhiinngg tooo channgeee!

xo nathalie!