Week 3 - Post
consonant craving
would Wordsworth wimper or would he wail when asked whether wonderous words would be welcomed by this white page?
could Charlemagne, crowned, conjure clever citations or cower from conjecture, coloured with corrosive content?
how heartfelt and honest the hymns of Homer when hyperbole is here honoured as heretical and hesitation has ( Read more... )
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you have cleverly put together a series of witty questions which makes the reader think, not only about the question, but also the content, with all the alliteration and consonate sounds.
i think some sentences need to be rearranged and expressed better so you dont get so lost reading it.
eg: ...and soulfully sing sordid songs, so satan shimmers, not shines, and ... etc.
just a suggestion.
well done, was fun to read.
ash x
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