I really enjoyed reading your poem, it reminded me of the poem 'advertisement' we read in lit recently, especially the use of personification in giving the inanimate human emotions but in doing so creating a story! I was keen to know more about Joe and what he had done!
WOW! is this true? This is probably not going to be any help at all as I can't comment on the subject because I don't know if its serious or funny, so I don't know if I should be shocked or to laugh. But the language is fanatstic, the composition of the lines etc. makes a lot of sense. Congratulations.
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I really enjoyed reading your poem, it reminded me of the poem 'advertisement' we read in lit recently, especially the use of personification in giving the inanimate human emotions but in doing so creating a story! I was keen to know more about Joe and what he had done!
Nice work!
Liz
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