Ok, here's college essay number 1 (only two more to go, but I don't want to think about those right now). I would love it if you would read it, comment on it, anything! Here it is
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I loved what you wrote. It was very moving! Also, I have been listening to the song "Call Me Al" recently because this past weekend at Clark there was a dance show and that was one of their songs. I already loved the song, but have been playing it non-stop lately. Just thought you'd like to hear that :)
Also, from reading this does it mean you have your driver's license now??
"If you be my body guard...."
anonymous
December 13 2006, 00:21:20 UTC
What can I say?! I love it! Hell, how could I not; it's our whole summer wrapped up in a floury tortilla of love! And besides that, it's written really well. Flash-backs can be corny, but you definaitly gave it an edge. Bum's beach was the best, though, dead fish and all! The only thing I think you may have left out was our random fishing trip, though that was only the one time down by Presqisle and we didn't even catch anything! Ah well, something has to end up on the cutting room floor.
BTW, where should I ship your X-Mas present???
I applied to Northland, though only so my parents would quit freaking out about me having my sights only on Warren Wilson. Let's just say it'll be our little secret.... ;) -Erin
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I loved what you wrote. It was very moving! Also, I have been listening to the song "Call Me Al" recently because this past weekend at Clark there was a dance show and that was one of their songs. I already loved the song, but have been playing it non-stop lately. Just thought you'd like to hear that :)
Also, from reading this does it mean you have your driver's license now??
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BTW, where should I ship your X-Mas present???
I applied to Northland, though only so my parents would quit freaking out about me having my sights only on Warren Wilson. Let's just say it'll be our little secret.... ;)
-Erin
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