Finally it's up! Being whiny SO pays off, the tarts scene is awesome, with the dirty phone talk and all! I knew you're gonna write it great :) I'm not gonna repeat myself, you already know my opinion on every detail, just love it. Oh, one thing, I'm definitely giving you a |O| sandwich for it, consider it as thumbs up, but so much better, don't you think? Lol!
What a fun idea for a premise! I can totally see Logan being the hottie TA. (None of my TAs were that cute, dammit.) And this line just cracked me up, because it sounds like something he'd say: “She’s fucking beautiful and she’s a freakin’ badass action-figure agent that can pick-off a moving target like a God damn sniper.”
I like the way you wrote L&V's dialogue--loving and bantery without being sugary sweet.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. That line was actually a very late addition. At first he just said "she's fucking beautiful." But that wasn't doing it for me so I took a little from Keith's vocabulary and let Logan boast a bit. Who wouldn't be stoked that their wife was a kick ass marksman AND was good looking too.
Great job, Christy!! I love the addition. And it looks like you got the things I would have suggested without my email actually going through. Serves me right for trying to send it from work...our stupid email was marked as spam or something so none of our emails we sent went through.
Also, LOVE that you changed the elevator conversation. That was a great way to tie it all in. This fic just makes me smile. Great job.
Thanks so much. Your opinion means a lot. I'm so happy with the new elevator scene. I wanted Logan to express to his friends/co-workers that he was proud of V and that he loved her and loved being married to her. I think that scene expressed what I wanted it to do. I also love that Logan said how V wasn't just pretty, she was "fucking beautiful" and she could kick ass too. ::sighs:: Logan is the perfect man. LOL!
Today I wanted to reread some of your fics (I do it sometimes when I want to read something good), so I searched your Licejournarl page and surprise, you have a new fic. And like the other ones is really good. You did well all the flashbacks parts. All my english teachers were woman, I would love someone like Logan .
Wouldn't we all?! LOL! I had a few cute T.A.s in college but none of them looked like Logan or I would have been one of the sluts in the front row. LOL!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Thanks for your kind words. I haven't gone through and reread my fics in a long long time. It might be time to revisit HaHI.
You dreamt Logan would be a sexy teacher's assistant in grad school at Georgetown with V as a badass federal agent by his side too?! Wow, two great minds, baby, two great minds! LOL!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I need to reread CTBH? soon too.
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Being whiny SO pays off, the tarts scene is awesome, with the dirty phone talk and all! I knew you're gonna write it great :) I'm not gonna repeat myself, you already know my opinion on every detail, just love it. Oh, one thing, I'm definitely giving you a |O| sandwich for it, consider it as thumbs up, but so much better, don't you think? Lol!
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Thanks for reading and rereading and rereading and finally officially reviewing.
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I like the way you wrote L&V's dialogue--loving and bantery without being sugary sweet.
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Thanks for reviewing.
Christy
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Also, LOVE that you changed the elevator conversation. That was a great way to tie it all in. This fic just makes me smile. Great job.
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Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Christy
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. Thanks for your kind words. I haven't gone through and reread my fics in a long long time. It might be time to revisit HaHI.
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I need to reread CTBH? soon too.
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