Comments | chuck_the_plant: "Wingman"

chuck_the_plant

"Wingman"

Feb 25, 2013 22:37

Title: "Wingman"
Prompt: Parrot
Brigit's Flame February 2013 week four
Word Count/ warnings: 962 words, rated PG
by Graham Smith

I looked at myself in the mirror, and only then did I realize just how filthy it was. Good lord; when had anyone in the house last washed it? Had it ever been washed? It at least hadn’t been washed this ( Read more... )

wingman, twins, brigit's flame, parrot

Comments 3

innana88 March 8 2013, 03:42:56 UTC

An interesting and creative take on the prompt.

I confess I rolled my eyes a bit at the whole 'wingman' thing. As a 'chick', it's kind of hard to root for your protagonist here. The writing itself is pretty solid though.

ribcagerebel March 11 2013, 20:44:46 UTC

your editor here. i am soo sorry for not getting this to you sooner. You asked for moderate with no grammar ( ... )

fawatson March 17 2013, 17:23:18 UTC

EDITING COMMENTS I did enjoy this piece - your take on the prompt was original and unexpected and certainly held my interest ( ... )