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"The Beat" - Submission for Brigit's Flame, April 2013 week 1
Apr 06, 2013 23:00
Brigit's Flame - April Week 1 (
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police
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cliff
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bright's flame
,
noir
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bluegerl
April 8 2013, 12:19:48 UTC
YIKE.. JEEEEZZZ... OOOOH.
It's lovely to see you back again Chuck, truly. BUT!!!!!!!!!
Ahhh I was just getting into my stride...and now?
Dammit Oh lord... chews fingers... oh ... NOooooo. NO!!!!
I WONT HAVE IT!
He made it!!! He DID!! Gotta... Yes...
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keppiehed
April 8 2013, 14:09:29 UTC
This was a fun, fast-paced action read, with a great cliff-hanger at the end!
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bloodofareptile
April 8 2013, 19:35:49 UTC
That was really engaging, nice job!
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kathiann
April 9 2013, 01:10:17 UTC
This was awesome. The action, the sights, the smells. Very well done.
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silverflight8
April 9 2013, 18:19:22 UTC
Oh, man, what a cliffhanger!
....pun not intended.
I enjoyed it very much.
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It's lovely to see you back again Chuck, truly. BUT!!!!!!!!!
Ahhh I was just getting into my stride...and now?
Dammit Oh lord... chews fingers... oh ... NOooooo. NO!!!!
I WONT HAVE IT!
He made it!!! He DID!! Gotta... Yes...
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....pun not intended.
I enjoyed it very much.
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