really love this story..^^ perverted minho n taemin..O_O i cant stop laughing when i read this chap.. :DD n also at the hot scene..BD its really a masterpiece..^^ idk why but when i read this sentence i sddnly rmmbr george of the junggle song.. "BABE WATCH OUT" hehehe^^ cant wait for the next update...
awww thanks for the love!:))) Never thought a lot would actually read my works since I'm still a newbie writer. You guys are AWESOME!:D THANKS FOR READING!:))
pwahahahahaha!!! why can't i stop laughing even if i'm now writing a comment?? haha!!and dang it! it's past 1am here!!!
this was soooooo effin nice!!! it was worth the wait really :DD their hot fights + kissing + emoticons + the wall was just abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz!!!wut?!
i hope i can sleep peacefully after this...hahaha!!! be waiting for that next chapter bb...and uh...*whisper*hwaiting on the smut part! XD
FINALLY!!! Oh, finally I got the next part of this story, I've been so curios since the last part... >.< Minho and Taemin in this part is so funny, HOT and makes my heart beating more harder every time I read the words. They're so unpredictable, that's fun And I can't stop laughing at all when they're fight. You blend much emotion in your story so amazingly, and use the words to draw the situation expressively. That's so cool!! Two thumbs up for you!!! v^^v I think you'll write great smut scene, cause in this part you success write so HOT HOT HOT kissing XDDD Keep trying!!! I'll missing the next part so much... X333 Fighting!!!!! ^^
FINALLY YES!! =)) LOL THIS UPDATE TOOK YEARS. sorry for that lol XD I was busy and.. lazy. K, kill me now. =))) hahahaha
writers can be lazy sometimes, in my case...most of the time:o hahahahaha Yeah, I try to put romance, comedy and suspense together so yeah, hope you're not confused with everything. I'm just extremely random that's why. lol XD
oh for the smut TT.TT I'm really worried about that hahahahahahahahahahaha
I seriously think my smut would be epic fail! :o HAHAHAHA
and hot kissing? I really don't know how I wrote that o.o hahahaha but I'll still try, for my readers!!
Yeah... Me too... I tried to write SHINee story too, but sometimes it'll be little difficult when we don't know how to arrange the plot, and sometimes like no idea how to writing... And same with you again, I must concentrate to my real life too, so many things to do... >.<, then I haven't finished one story too uffhh... ToT I know how it felt... xixixi~~ ;pp
I really love your story, and the way you write it, and I love Minho and Taemin character too in this story <333
Don't worry about the smut scene... Just write it with your way like usual, Cause you're truly so expressionist in writing stories, Reading about some smut stories maybe will help you if you have difficulties...
The kissing scene in this part is really great I think... trust me!! So HOT~~... I thumping so hard when I read it.. X33
So, don't give up. Ok!!! Good Luck 4 U.. Chayooouu!!!! v^^v
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perverted minho n taemin..O_O
i cant stop laughing when i read this chap.. :DD
n also at the hot scene..BD
its really a masterpiece..^^
idk why but when i read this sentence i sddnly rmmbr george of the junggle song..
"BABE WATCH OUT"
hehehe^^
cant wait for the next update...
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You guys are AWESOME!:D
THANKS FOR READING!:))
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waiit imma do my mapeh first :P
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i was laughing the whole time, and as usual, a great fic!
AND MINHO CAN READ TAEMIN MIND LOL 8DD
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lol for me, I'm ignoring my homeworks right now. HAHAHA =))) screw school, write fics. LOL =)))
thanks for reading! awww I remember you, you'rethe filipino!:))))))
hahah salamat sa pagbasa. LOL
and you were asking how old I am? right? lol
I'm 15. =))
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it was supposed to be taemin's mind :(
LOL THAT'S RIGHT BB screw school write fics :))
AHAHAHA you're welcome dear ♥
OH 15 YOU'RE NOT THAT OLD AND 4TH YEAR MUST BE HARD DD8
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AWESOME. i mean whoaaaa minho is such a sex beast LOLOLOL i wonder until when taem could resist minho XD
if i were taem i would give myself to him
BTW, this is the 1st time im here on your LJ so, hi ~ *waving* ive added you <3
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HI!! I've added you back :D
thanks for reading :>
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brb reading :D
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this was soooooo effin nice!!! it was worth the wait really :DD
their hot fights + kissing + emoticons + the wall was just abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz!!!wut?!
i hope i can sleep peacefully after this...hahaha!!!
be waiting for that next chapter bb...and uh...*whisper*hwaiting on the smut part! XD
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lol I think we live in the same country, it's also past 1am here.
lols the smut part. TT.TT
I think my smut would be epic fail.
First smut ever for this fic. LOL
I'll try :3
Goodnight!:))
and thanks for reading.;)
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Oh, finally I got the next part of this story,
I've been so curios since the last part... >.<
Minho and Taemin in this part is so funny, HOT and makes my heart beating more harder every time I read the words.
They're so unpredictable, that's fun
And I can't stop laughing at all when they're fight.
You blend much emotion in your story so amazingly, and use the words to draw the situation expressively.
That's so cool!! Two thumbs up for you!!! v^^v
I think you'll write great smut scene,
cause in this part you success write so HOT HOT HOT kissing XDDD
Keep trying!!!
I'll missing the next part so much... X333
Fighting!!!!! ^^
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I was busy and.. lazy. K, kill me now.
=))) hahahaha
writers can be lazy sometimes, in my case...most of the time:o hahahahaha
Yeah, I try to put romance, comedy and suspense together so yeah, hope you're not confused with everything.
I'm just extremely random that's why. lol XD
oh for the smut TT.TT
I'm really worried about that hahahahahahahahahahaha
I seriously think my smut would be epic fail! :o HAHAHAHA
and hot kissing? I really don't know how I wrote that o.o
hahahaha but I'll still try, for my readers!!
thanks for reading:3
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I tried to write SHINee story too, but sometimes it'll be little difficult when we don't know how to arrange the plot, and sometimes like no idea how to writing... And same with you again, I must concentrate to my real life too, so many things to do... >.<,
then I haven't finished one story too uffhh... ToT
I know how it felt... xixixi~~ ;pp
I really love your story, and the way you write it,
and I love Minho and Taemin character too in this story <333
Don't worry about the smut scene... Just write it with your way like usual,
Cause you're truly so expressionist in writing stories,
Reading about some smut stories maybe will help you if you have difficulties...
The kissing scene in this part is really great I think... trust me!!
So HOT~~... I thumping so hard when I read it.. X33
So, don't give up. Ok!!!
Good Luck 4 U..
Chayooouu!!!! v^^v
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