Muddy Pellet of Lesser Clarity

Oct 21, 2005 12:23

today i woke up at 10:00 exactly. i stretched as much as gravity and the futon beneath me would allow ( Read more... )

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nschimme October 21 2005, 19:19:32 UTC
I want to read this but it is simply too difficult. :'(

Next time use capitalization and perhaps some paragraphs?

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chully October 21 2005, 19:39:10 UTC
paragraphs just wouldnt fit. this way describes the morning better. nice icon.

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mrbuddha October 21 2005, 22:31:28 UTC
It's perfect just the way it is. I liked it quite a bit.

Learn how to read, Nils.

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yakman October 21 2005, 23:50:54 UTC
I really enjoyed it too. Great descriptions really drew me into your writing. Good stuff. It feels kinda surreal to read, but lots of fun.

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