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Dec 18, 2012 14:31

In a sexual situation in fiction, when one character gives another an order, which answer is hotter?

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Which answer is hotter?
"Yessir."
"Yes, sir."

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nicnac918 December 18 2012, 19:58:34 UTC
I'm going to give the canonical vague and unhelpful answer: it depends! But seriously, it does. In a slow and languid seduction scene, "yes, sir" is *much* better, but when it's all frenetic passion, the spaces and the commas and whatnot feel out of place. They're overcome by lust, words should be blending together! So, that's my two cents.

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