And I didn't tell you this, but-
And I didn't tell you this, but-
SNSD/Jinki (all 9 girls, but not at once)
angst-crack-pre/post-debut all rolled up into one. this is more of a story about SNSD, it will be understood much better if you have extensive knowledge of them. numerous references to real events; the rest is an overzealous imagination.
plotline/muse from chiharu, over at pisudori_play. beautiful writing, and thank you so much!
Taeyeon is too-loud laughter and quiet 3AM texting underneath the blankets. Taeyeon is nervous eyes and a shaking voice, fingers intertwined behind their backs with mikes in hand. Taeyeon is thick glasses hiding tired eyes and unfinished essays. Taeyeon is a tired voice cracking. Taeyeon is stronger, Taeyeon is a better leader than him.
Jessica is silent smirks and thick long hair. Jessica is pursed lips and a narrowed glare, arms crossed tight against her chest. Jessica is skirts and flats, arm tucked in his. Jessica is impatience and English homework, hello goodbye how are you? Jessica is fake eyelashes making shadows on her cheeks. Jessica is raucous parties in strange apartments. Jessica is ice-cold pretty, Jessica's tears are warm.
Sunny is girlish giggles and hips touching hips. Sunny is silly pictures, cheek to cheek. Sunny is pale skin and blunt bangs, Sunny is oh so small. Sunny is puckered lips and grapefruit lip gloss. Sunny is awkward like he is, and then Sunny is not awkward anymore. Sunny is vibrato quick and delicate, Sunny is Falling Slowly and laughing with Sungmin.
Tiffany is nervous smiles and wringing hands. Tiffany is Mariah Carey-Eric Benet-Britney Spears ringtones. TIffany is awkward Korean syllables and phone calls to America. Tiffany is disappearing on Mother's Day, Tiffany is bouquets of chrysanthemum. Tiffany sometimes smells like beer and can't walk in a straight line. Tiffany is longshortfakereal hair and pink nail polish. Tiffany is unfinished lunchboxes, Tiffany isn't that hungry.
Hyoyeon is quiet greetings and comfortable conversation. Hyoyeon is late night practices in the dance studio, Hyoyeon is a gentle correction of his arm, Hyoyeon is his hand at her jaw. Hyoyeon is belly-button piercings and metal studs. Hyoyeon is late night walks to her house, breath ghosting over lips. Hyoyeon is her watching him watch her and covered smiles. Hyoyeon is falling asleep on the bus, head on his shoulder. Hyoyeon is ice-cream stained shirts on a hot summer day, falling in pools and conversations and love. Hyoyeon is the first girl he's ever considered taking home to meet his mother.
Yuri is that girl dancing on stage with Hyoyeon. Yuri is dark eyes and dark skin, a tiny waist. Yuri is flirtatious eyes that turn joking in less than a second. Yuri is fake blood and spiders, Yuri is rolling on the floor in laughter with him while Jonghyun screams in terror. Yuri is health shakes and yoga classes. Yuri is always a little crazy and so is he.
Sooyoung is impossibly tiny and impossibly long legs. Sooyoung is two bowls of noodles and waiter, one more please! Sooyoung is focused murmuring, finger running down lines of kana and kata and kanji. Sooyoung is a punch in the arm and dimples when she's happy. Sooyoung is practiced smiles for the camera. Sooyoung is determined, Sooyoung is hidden CDs from Japan. Sooyoung refuses to call him oppa.
Yoona is lips parted wide in amusement. Yoona is dorky sexy angry sad whenever whatever she wants. Yoona is everyone's ideal girl and this goes for him too, for a little while. Yoona is Seohyun's best friend. Yoona is scared of the cameras, Yoona hides behind him sometimes. Yoona is shaking shoulders and watery smiles. Yoona is an actress.
Seohyun is the graceful lines of her fingers neck arms. Seohyun is bent over the piano, Seohyun is page one hundred twenty in Hanon's book of piano studies. Seohyun is Kibum-sshi and Jonghyun-sunbaenim and Minho is just Minho. Seohyun is Yoona's best friend. Seohyun is blushing cheeks and a hand over her mouth when they meet in the hallway. Seohyun is quiet but nagging, Seohyun acts older than she really is.
They (taeyeon-jessica-sunny-tiffany-hyoyeon-yuri-sooyoung-yoona-seohyun) are all very beautiful girls, and Jinki thinks someday, they will make someone (not him) very very happy.
Well, I'm tired. What do you guys think? Style, plot, characters, comment?
SNSD/Jinki (all 9 girls, but not at once)
angst-crack-pre/post-debut all rolled up into one. this is more of a story about SNSD, it will be understood much better if you have extensive knowledge of them. numerous references to real events; the rest is an overzealous imagination.
plotline/muse from chiharu, over at pisudori_play. beautiful writing, and thank you so much!
Taeyeon is too-loud laughter and quiet 3AM texting underneath the blankets. Taeyeon is nervous eyes and a shaking voice, fingers intertwined behind their backs with mikes in hand. Taeyeon is thick glasses hiding tired eyes and unfinished essays. Taeyeon is a tired voice cracking. Taeyeon is stronger, Taeyeon is a better leader than him.
Jessica is silent smirks and thick long hair. Jessica is pursed lips and a narrowed glare, arms crossed tight against her chest. Jessica is skirts and flats, arm tucked in his. Jessica is impatience and English homework, hello goodbye how are you? Jessica is fake eyelashes making shadows on her cheeks. Jessica is raucous parties in strange apartments. Jessica is ice-cold pretty, Jessica's tears are warm.
Sunny is girlish giggles and hips touching hips. Sunny is silly pictures, cheek to cheek. Sunny is pale skin and blunt bangs, Sunny is oh so small. Sunny is puckered lips and grapefruit lip gloss. Sunny is awkward like he is, and then Sunny is not awkward anymore. Sunny is vibrato quick and delicate, Sunny is Falling Slowly and laughing with Sungmin.
Tiffany is nervous smiles and wringing hands. Tiffany is Mariah Carey-Eric Benet-Britney Spears ringtones. TIffany is awkward Korean syllables and phone calls to America. Tiffany is disappearing on Mother's Day, Tiffany is bouquets of chrysanthemum. Tiffany sometimes smells like beer and can't walk in a straight line. Tiffany is longshortfakereal hair and pink nail polish. Tiffany is unfinished lunchboxes, Tiffany isn't that hungry.
Hyoyeon is quiet greetings and comfortable conversation. Hyoyeon is late night practices in the dance studio, Hyoyeon is a gentle correction of his arm, Hyoyeon is his hand at her jaw. Hyoyeon is belly-button piercings and metal studs. Hyoyeon is late night walks to her house, breath ghosting over lips. Hyoyeon is her watching him watch her and covered smiles. Hyoyeon is falling asleep on the bus, head on his shoulder. Hyoyeon is ice-cream stained shirts on a hot summer day, falling in pools and conversations and love. Hyoyeon is the first girl he's ever considered taking home to meet his mother.
Yuri is that girl dancing on stage with Hyoyeon. Yuri is dark eyes and dark skin, a tiny waist. Yuri is flirtatious eyes that turn joking in less than a second. Yuri is fake blood and spiders, Yuri is rolling on the floor in laughter with him while Jonghyun screams in terror. Yuri is health shakes and yoga classes. Yuri is always a little crazy and so is he.
Sooyoung is impossibly tiny and impossibly long legs. Sooyoung is two bowls of noodles and waiter, one more please! Sooyoung is focused murmuring, finger running down lines of kana and kata and kanji. Sooyoung is a punch in the arm and dimples when she's happy. Sooyoung is practiced smiles for the camera. Sooyoung is determined, Sooyoung is hidden CDs from Japan. Sooyoung refuses to call him oppa.
Yoona is lips parted wide in amusement. Yoona is dorky sexy angry sad whenever whatever she wants. Yoona is everyone's ideal girl and this goes for him too, for a little while. Yoona is Seohyun's best friend. Yoona is scared of the cameras, Yoona hides behind him sometimes. Yoona is shaking shoulders and watery smiles. Yoona is an actress.
Seohyun is the graceful lines of her fingers neck arms. Seohyun is bent over the piano, Seohyun is page one hundred twenty in Hanon's book of piano studies. Seohyun is Kibum-sshi and Jonghyun-sunbaenim and Minho is just Minho. Seohyun is Yoona's best friend. Seohyun is blushing cheeks and a hand over her mouth when they meet in the hallway. Seohyun is quiet but nagging, Seohyun acts older than she really is.
They (taeyeon-jessica-sunny-tiffany-hyoyeon-yuri-sooyoung-yoona-seohyun) are all very beautiful girls, and Jinki thinks someday, they will make someone (not him) very very happy.
Well, I'm tired. What do you guys think? Style, plot, characters, comment?